I enjoyed your story. Good work on the characters. I've always been fascinated when Matt and Trey add a new character especially a girl. It always adds something which honestly seems to be missing from the show. It's what inspired me to write my own script and story beats.

Randy Marsh 2016 wrote:This is really good so far

Thanks, I appreciate that.

Sorry about that, first time poster. I'd rather keep it on the topic I started and get it off here.

Climbing the summit– Story Beats Summery-Kyle and Lindsey are in a committed and happy relationship. Stephen and Linda learn a powerful lesson about tolerance when they realize how much they miss their own child. Randy and Sharon go into Takashi’s athletic store; Randy makes a fool of himself trying...

PC Love – Story Beats Summery-Lindsey continues her list of revenge taking her new relationship with Kyle further then she expected as the two grow strong feelings toward each other. Alex decides to change it up at Raisins with a new attitude and inviting new customers after she learns the Goth Kids...

Make it Rain’sins – Story Beats 1. South Park Elementary listens to the morning announcements. Butters/Margarine Stotch has died. Both killed in a terrible car crash while on a date. Some of the students are saddened but for the most part nobody really cares. 2. The scene stops after the morning ann...

I have three more continuations of my first script Transitional Butters. These are just the story beats. They go in order:

1)Transitional Butters

2)Make it Rain'sins

3)PC Love

4)Climbing the Summit

I'm not done with the arch, two more complete scripts should cover it.

Climbing the summit– Story Beats Summery-Kyle and Lindsey are in a committed and happy relationship. Stephen and Linda learn a powerful lesson about tolerance when they realize how much they miss their own child. Randy and Sharon go into Takashi’s athletic store; Randy makes a fool of himself trying...

PC Love – Story Beats Summery-Lindsey continues her list of revenge taking her new relationship with Kyle further then she expected as the two grow strong feelings toward each other. Alex decides to change it up at Raisins with a new attitude and inviting new customers after she learns the Goth Kids...

I have three more continuations of my first script Transitional Butters. These are just the story beats. They go in order: 1)Transitional Butters 2)Make it Rain'sins 3)PC Love 4)Climbing the Summit I'm not done with the arch, two more complete scripts should cover it. Make it Rain’sins – Story Beats...

First of an on going story arch. My daughter Ada inspired me with all the hardships she has gone through and with the support of my wife I wrote this which started off as a form of therapy and has become much much more. Written with Final Draft 9. TRANSITIONAL BUTTERS FADE IN: EXT. SOUTH PARK NEIGHB...

An idea I wanted to post. First of a five part story arch. My daughter was the inspiration. Written with Final Draft 9. TRANSITIONAL BUTTERS FADE IN: EXT. SOUTH PARK NEIGHBORHOOD, DAY BUTTERS STOTCH walks down the sidewalk on his way to school. He sees no one but girls leaving for school as he walks...