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by KylezGirl4Ever
Sat Dec 09, 2006 3:31 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Eh, whatever. Normally I'd start a whole rabble about this and rant on and on about it but I'm in no mood today. I'll just drop the subject.

PS: Thanks Devv for kicking me back to reality.
by KylezGirl4Ever
Sat Dec 09, 2006 3:24 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Whoops, I almost forgot to for a moment. Whew, thanks for reminding me. :D That's happened several times this week.
by KylezGirl4Ever
Sat Dec 09, 2006 1:45 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Oh I get it. You're still mad about that review I left you. And besides, look at South Park. THEY'RE nine year olds and they're taking busses to Mexico, going to Denver to get prostitudes, smoking, having sex parties, so my fic is actually a possible for the future. Also, if you look at some other f...
by KylezGirl4Ever
Sat Dec 09, 2006 4:58 am
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Chapter 9:

Chapter 9: "You WHAT?" Screamed Bebe; her eyes jerking to a halt as if her brain had deceased functioning. "Shhh," Bertha said, annoyed. "I don't want anybody knowing about it. I don't even think he knows." Bertha whispered hotly. "Who?" Bebe asked, clearly unaware that her hands were shaking in sho...
by KylezGirl4Ever
Fri Dec 08, 2006 10:16 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: C.O.O.T.I.E.S.
Replies: 8
Views: 3204

CRITTY

I applaud your first fanfic. Ah, reminds me of those days. However, there are some errors. The following information is what I called 'constructive criticism'. It is not meant to hurt your feelings or try to get you to stop writing. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Here it goes. First of al...
by KylezGirl4Ever
Thu Dec 07, 2006 1:12 am
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Chapter 8:

Chapter 8: Bebe looked through all the pictures, smiling wider and wider with every one. Finally, she took a wire and connected her cell phone to the computer, importing the pictures from there to her desktop. She printed them out and shoved them in her backpack, heading off to bed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~...
by KylezGirl4Ever
Wed Dec 06, 2006 11:30 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: The Biggest Love Triangle You Could Ever Read About!
Replies: 1479
Views: 182240

I hate myself for pointing this out -- since I love this fic -- but you don't find out you're pregnant the night after you . . . Yeah. I leanred that two weeks ago in Biology, and it takes a bit over a week to be able to tell, since the egg has to have to have time to grow enough. I'd go into detail...
by KylezGirl4Ever
Wed Dec 06, 2006 11:26 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Morons with Time Machines
Replies: 5
Views: 1774

K, it's OK. Not excellent, though. Kyle was born in may, and he's not seven years old. He's nine, actually. And, if they just got back from lunch why did they have recess?
by KylezGirl4Ever
Wed Dec 06, 2006 4:12 am
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Chapter 7:

Chapter 7: Frances was a whore. That was the first thing anybody realized about her when they met her. She looked almost identical to Bebe, except a few inches taller, bigger boobs and tighter curls. She wore several pounds of makeup and very little clothing. She checked her appearance in her pink a...
by KylezGirl4Ever
Mon Dec 04, 2006 5:50 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Chapter 6:

Chapter 6: "I have an awesome idea." Bebe said to her friends excitedly. It was yet another sleepover she was at. The girls around her all leaned in, bracing themselves to hear what fabulous thing she had to say. "'K, well you know how Kyle's in British Columbia or something?" "Uhuh." The other girl...
by KylezGirl4Ever
Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:15 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Well other people like her so I think that if you don't like her you don't have to read this.
by KylezGirl4Ever
Sat Dec 02, 2006 8:11 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: The Worst Fanfic Ever
Replies: 124
Views: 30867

Oooo, I was mentioned too! XD
by KylezGirl4Ever
Sat Dec 02, 2006 8:07 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Chapter 5:

Chapter 5: Abrina limped home from practice holding her dance bag. She dropped it as soon as she got in the door and started hobbling up the stairs. Abrina cursed as she stumbled over the fourth step. Token had dropped her twice. Once during a dip and the other time during a lift. She had sprained h...
by KylezGirl4Ever
Sat Dec 02, 2006 4:45 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

XD
by KylezGirl4Ever
Sat Dec 02, 2006 12:08 am
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: Ms. Taken
Replies: 106
Views: 25667

Chapter 4:

Chapter 4: Abrina broke down. She had finally done it. She had finally collapsed. Things had bottled up inside her; feelings, thoughts; and now she had bursted. She had been holding it in for the last few weeks, but at this very moment she hadn't been able to contain anything else. Instantly all the...

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