*I had made a post saying that I thought this episode would just be a sort of combination of "It Hits the Fan" and "Cripple Fight" but I can't find that post... ...Anyhow, I was disappointed by this episode. I mean, it had everything an episode really needs: Characters, a setting, jokes, a plot... a...

Yeah, Ali, if you didn't want to include the scene, I'm certainly sorry for putting any pressure on you to do so. Actually, if I had been writing this fic, I would have had <creative surge> Sheila try to be accepting, but then have a nervous breakdown or something (Nobody else use that idea, or I wi...

*is annoyed at stuff* This is quite interesting... every time Ali or Jori took their time posting a chapter, people would respond with encouragement, and comforting words, and 'lols', but when I decide that I'm going to turn the tables for a change, everybody is hostile... hmm... I'm giving you auth...

Well, it's great to see this back. I didn't have time to read all of it again, but I loved it before. I thought the deaths were creative, and everybody was in character (or at least how they acted back in the earlier seasons). Good job. Kudos. But, you shouldn't have put "First Fic" in the title of ...

Oh, I'm sorrrrrrry, I'd loooove to review, but unfortuately I have a silly-willy-case of writer's block which I am going to allow to prevent me from posting for the next five weeks ! It's not like I'm going to try to overcome it, or anything, nooooo, I'm just going to leave you all in quiet, agonizi...

Stan 51 HURT
Kyle 44
Kenny 32 HEAL
Tweek 27

Tweek's not going down on my watch.

I'm guessing that the original name of the main character was "Neo"? (Lol... you should have changed that to Stan.)

Nice, suave style of writing, which kind of seemed like what a wolf would actually be thinking. Kind of. Keep up the good work!

Well, go for it! That tasted like a preview to me. And everybody knows that for previews, there's going to be a larger feature...

Sorry, but I still have absolutely no idea how to even begin my post. Yeah, it's gonna take a while for me to write it.

I won't disappoint you guys though. ;D
By the way, I started writing the post last night. ;D

Yaaay. It's been too long since a war fic came out. First of all, I would recommend checking for spelling and grammar, as I spotted a lot of problems with that, including the way you spelled "Stewart" and even sentences that just stopped before they were over. And this fic ended too quickly, without...

Holy sh*t! Holy f*cking crowshit! That was incredible. I was expecting you to say "I am Borg" for the entire story. We are Borg. We only seek to improve the quality of life for all living creatures. Why do you resist us? So sad... I knew that there was something strange about Jimmy! Every time I wat...

Yes, I actually do have the last chapter planned. I discussed it with Jori, and we came to an agreement on the final couples and such. Soooo...only Jori and I know who ends up with who right now. The rest of you will have to wait until I finally post the last chapter (which won't be for a while, un...

I actually said that "Li'l Crime Stoppers" and the Kenny-deaths were irrelevant to the point I brought up (that point being how Stan had problems with actually killing stuff ) because Stan did not kill anything in those cases. What I was trying to say was that Stan has or has had problems with causi...

You're probably right about Wendy, which actually reminds me of this: m But Kyle might get a little annoyed... Oh well, you were right on MSN when you said he would be responsible enough, Shane. Cartman is a nice touch. Yeah, I didn't think that having a psychopath as Chief of Security would work we...

If the children of South Park were oddly put in a scenario where they are commanding a Star-Trek like starship, what ranks/titles do you think each of them would have? Here's what I think: Stan- Captain (obviously) Kyle- 1st Officer (almost as obvious) Wendy- 2nd Officer/Navigation (so I don't appea...