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by JAL010
Tue Jun 12, 2007 1:04 am
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: The Sum of All Spelling Bee Swarms
Replies: 6
Views: 1332

I agree, the concept is okay in theory, but there are several problems with the execution. First, nearly everyone is out of character. The dialogue is stinted and sounds more like it's being spoken by androids than by the South Park characters. Secondly, your grammar needs a lot of work. It reads a...
by JAL010
Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:24 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: The Sum of All Spelling Bee Swarms
Replies: 6
Views: 1332

(Note: To understand this part better, you need to read a bit about City Airlines, also in this site) Chapter 2: Several weeks have happened since Kyle's victory in the local spelling bee. Under Cartman's supervision, he trains himself very hard so he can avenge the damaged honor of the past World C...
by JAL010
Sun Jun 10, 2007 11:03 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: The Sum of All Spelling Bee Swarms
Replies: 6
Views: 1332

The Sum of All Spelling Bee Swarms

Chapter 1: Mr. Garrison: All right, class, our school is in such a ghastly state that we must gain our place in the National Spelling Bee. Who is brave enough to brave the contest? Butters raise his hand, and so does Token and Kyle. Cartman: Kyle! You're going straight through a slaughter zone! Kyle...
by JAL010
Tue Jun 05, 2007 11:40 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: City Airlines - My first fanfic
Replies: 5
Views: 1497

Chapter 7: Stan: Captain, what are you doing? Yvan: I need some rest. I flew 4 hours; now it is your time to take command of the aircraft. I start the clock, I am going to bed, but please do NOT deactivate the MCDUs. As the A330 chief pilot, I have full authority over your professional fate, even if...
by JAL010
Mon Jun 04, 2007 3:09 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: JAL Cargo with Stan
Replies: 2
Views: 1503

JAL Cargo with Stan

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My first fan art, using one of my Flight Simulator 772ERF screenshots as the background.
by JAL010
Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:04 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: City Airlines - My first fanfic
Replies: 5
Views: 1497

------------Chapter 4------------ Tuong: "Shi-ty" Airlines will begin services to Toronto-Pearson whenever we have one A320 pilot; who wants to fly to there first? Kyle: A320? Leave that to me. Tara: Kyle, I never was able to say this before, but... I am in love with your flying style. Everyone else...
by JAL010
Sat Jun 02, 2007 12:24 am
Forum: Off Topic Discussion
Topic: The "Introduce Yourself Here" Topic
Replies: 4373
Views: 587492

Lets see, I am Yvan or you can call me JAL010 (Japanair 10). I'm a 17 year old high school student from Quebec. I guess here are come tidbits about me. Favorite SP character: Stan, with Kyle in a close second. Favorite Band: Rush Favorite Airline: Japan Airlines (paint work), Cathay Pacific (onboard...
by JAL010
Fri Jun 01, 2007 8:03 pm
Forum: FanFics and Episode Ideas
Topic: City Airlines - My first fanfic
Replies: 5
Views: 1497

City Airlines - My first fanfic

Note: Events described therein are purely fictional and all resemblance with real events is purely coincidental. This is a toned-down version of a South Park script I'm writing here. ----------------------Chapter 1----------------- It all starts at City Wok, where the characters get to eat at the re...

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