If you have a fanfic that you have written, I would love to see it!! And I don't care if you think it sucks; most of them turn out to be very awesome.
KylezGirl4Ever wrote:I'm working on one called The New Kids Part I. It's about this family who moves to South Park away from NYC. The dad is a drug dealer, the mom is a stripper/hooker, the boy is a drug addict, one of the girls is a total slut, and then an ordinary girl except she is perfect at everything and she's extremely hot. Every guy likes her. The boys get mad at Kyle for getting first dibs on her, meanwhile Cartman gets on her bad side by calling Jews bad names, for her family is Jewish too. he family is rich. The hot girl has a really hard life. Check it out.
Uhhggg, that is the perfect example of a Mary Sue. Don't do that, so lame.
Stovepipe_Jam wrote:Mary Sues can be all right if used properly. But in the majority of cases, they are not used properly, and therefore turn out to be just annoying self-insertions (or insertions of what the author wishes was him/herself).
I've seen all of three Mary Sues used well. The problem being is that KG4E uses the stereotypical Mary. Oh well, she is new and therefore I won't get angry at her!
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