His Hat

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Athena1999
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Postby Athena1999 » Thu Jun 01, 2006 3:53 am

This was one of the best SP fan fiction stories I have ever read, clinched by the fact that Kyle discovered that his own self had died.. You should publish it on fanfiction.net. You have the characters nailed and everything.
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CatBroflovski
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Postby CatBroflovski » Thu Jun 01, 2006 10:14 pm

Wow thanks everyone :) I'm so glad you all liked it :D
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Taranis_Music
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Postby Taranis_Music » Fri Jun 02, 2006 12:39 am

Wow, that was good!
Kyle the Skeptic
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Postby Kyle the Skeptic » Sat Jun 03, 2006 7:46 pm

I have one additional comment regarding a slight technical detail. Statistically female victims are more likely than males to use the method described in your story. Male victims tend to choose methods that are more extreme, in order to finish the job quickly.

I don't mean to dwell on this though. The story is very well written.
Kyle's_Marklar
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Postby Kyle's_Marklar » Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:07 am

Well, it was a bit obvious what would happen especially since it was in a synagague but still, very dramatic and I almost actually cried. Good work!
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Tue Jun 13, 2006 5:34 am

God, that was so sad! I started crying, I really did. As soon as nobody answered Kyle, I knew. Great writing skills. Be sure to write more!
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Clyde789
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His Hat

Postby Clyde789 » Fri Jul 07, 2006 12:27 am

I freaking started crying
Style.I.Praise
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Postby Style.I.Praise » Sun Aug 13, 2006 3:32 am

I read this first on ff.net and thought it was wonderful! Keep up on the fanfics, I lurk around ff.net most of my internet time so expect reviews from me.
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Re: His Hat

Postby DownWithCalifornia » Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:29 am

Clyde789 wrote:I freaking started crying


Same here.

I have spent many hours on the computer reading South Park fanfictions... that was the best, no question.

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