20 Years Later

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Vine17
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Postby Vine17 » Tue Aug 22, 2006 2:16 am

isnt cartman a mecanic
Total_Beefcake
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Tue Aug 22, 2006 2:25 am

1. Sorry! I really couldn't hold myself back. :D

2. Sure, he can still be a mechanic.
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Postby StanismyMan » Tue Aug 22, 2006 3:00 am

That was an awsome chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
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Postby DevilAngel16 » Tue Aug 22, 2006 4:07 am

Oh man...Shelley Marsh? Hehehe...

Aww, but that's sad that she died...I felt bad for all of them. Even Cartman. ( haha. :wink: )

Good chapter Jori. I look forward to reading the next one.

And you paired Pip and Damien up...hehe...very cute. ^^
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Postby Athena1999 » Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:49 pm

"'Ello, mates!" Pip cheered, Damien's arm wrapped around his waist.


TURRAH! I am officially hooked on this already! ^____________^
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Fri Aug 25, 2006 12:19 am

Chapter 3!

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Kyle stood there, wrapped in a towel and his red curly hair like a mop, dripping with water. Everyone burst out laughing.

"Lookin' good, Jew-boy!" Cartman hooted.

Stan just had a big grin on his face. Nate hurried out, pushing his father back.

"Go get dressed, dad," he mumbled.

Kyle hurried inside. Everyone stopped laughing after a while.

Maura stared at Nate, blushing. She had a small smile on her face and she gazed at the red-head.

Wendy noticed this and giggled slightly.

"Go talk to him, honey," she whispered.

Maura shook her head.

"I can't!" she protested bashfully.

Wendy pushed her daughter forward.

Nate stared at the pretty young girl before him.

"H-hi," Maura stammered shyly.

"H-h-hey," he gulped, his face bright red.

Kyle came out a minute later, dressed and dry. His hat was tightly over his head and he looked around at everyone before pouncing into the crowd and hugging all of them.

"I've missed you guys so much!" Kyle screamed over the excited crowd.

Cartman came up and nearly tackled Kyle to the ground. The two embraced tightly, laughing. Stan and Kenny smirked at one another, and then joined in, almost knocking their friends over.

"I haven't seen any of you in such a long time!" Kyle gasped, pulling away.

He and Stan glomped eachother in a tight hug.

Wendy and Bebe were in tears as they greeted eachother.

Shiloh and Carmen smirked evilly at Tweek's son, Twitch, as he calmly sat in the snow, trying to ignore the chaos.

Craig's son, Larz, and Clyde's son, Nick, were wrestling nearby.

Butters' baby, Peanut he was nicknamed, was still cuddled into his father's arms.

Kenny, seeing all the kids around, made him feel a bit left out. He wished that his own daughter, Kendra, was here. But she was with her mother in Ohio right now. But she was supposed to be coming later this week.

"Lets all go out to dinner!" Token shouted, "My treat!"

The gang cheered and piled into their cars. It was off to the most expensive resteraunt in town!

They all sat at a long table, chattering, reminiscing, and sharing jokes.

"So where are you working now, Ken?" Kyle asked his blonde friend.

Kenny shrugged slightly. "I'm actually looking right now," he grinned sheepishly.

Kyle nodded and looked to Stan.

"Still a doctor?" he asked.

Stan nodded cheerfully.

"What about you, Cartman?"

"I'm a mechanic!" Cartman chuckled proudly.

Kenny thought a moment.

"Say, Kyle, what the hell are you doin', Ky?" he asked.

Kyle glanced around.

"Well, I'm a highschool teacher."

Cartman scoffed.

"Didn't see that one coming," he smirked.

Kyle made a face at him.

Stan leaned over, whispering to Kyle.

"Pip works at the Peppermint Hippo as a dancer now, and Damien owns the place!" he confided.

Kyle burst out laughing, slamming his fist down on the table.

"NO FREAKIN' WAY!" he howled.

"Yep!" Stan smirked.

"HEY!" a familiar voice snapped, "Kenny, I've been looking everywhere for you!"
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The end of this chapter. I hope you guys liked this one. You'll love the next one, I'm sure! It'll be up soon! :D
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Postby StanismyMan » Fri Aug 25, 2006 12:38 am

That was such a good chapter!! I really like this story!! Keep um' coming! I can't wait for 4!
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Athena1999 wrote:Camels
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Fri Aug 25, 2006 1:32 am

Thank ya!
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Postby DevilAngel16 » Fri Aug 25, 2006 1:53 am

Damn you Jori for ending chapter 3 with a cliff hanger! You'd better put chapter 4 up soon, or I'll...

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...force you to put it up sooner!

Yeah. :lol:

I really like this fic so far. Keep up the good work Jori. ^^
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Postby Athena1999 » Fri Aug 25, 2006 3:08 am

Total_Beefcake wrote:"Pip works at the Peppermint Hippo as a dancer now, and Damien owns the place!" he confided.


*fangirlish squeal* TAKE ME THERE! *holds up a wad of $100-bills* OMFG... he must seriously be the most popular (and most beautiful) dancer there! ^________^

But... wow! Of course, leave it to Wendy to get her daughter involved in a relationship early. I love Tweek's son... "Twitch" is such a wonderful name for him! And naturally he'd be the exact opposite of his dad! XD I seriously wonder what everyone else is up to. Hmmmm... could the familiar voice be KELLY? XD Or Kendra? Or maybe Kevin? Just some wild, somewhat educated guesses out of nowhere...
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:17 am

*sings* You'll have to wait and seeeeee~
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Postby Rualya » Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:18 am

It'd be funny if the familar voice was a person that was mentioned like once in an episode.
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:43 am

Here's chapter four! :D

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Kenny had yet another sheepish look on his face.

"Hey, Kelly," he mumbled.

Kelly stormed over, gently pushing their daughter towards him.

"Sorry!" Kenny sighed, "I didn't know you'd be coming TODAY."

Kelly rolled her eyes and gave Kendra a kiss.

"Have fun with daddy, baby," she grinned and walked out.

You see, she and Kenny had divorced a few years back.

Kendra hugged her father.

"DADDY!" she giggled, "Hi!"

Kenny kissed her forehead, returning the hug.

"Hi, sweetie," he cooed and lovingly ran his fingers through her golden hair.

"Well, this just makes the party even better!" Kyle cheered, smiling warmly at Kendra.

Kenny pulled his seven-year-old up on his lap and gave her an apple that had come with his meal. She happily munched on it. Kenny was very glad she was here. He loved her very much, and even if the world was ending, he'd be glad. Because he had his beautiful baby girl.

Later that night, the gang went back and crashed at the Broflovski residence. Kyle's father was there to greet them. Sheila had unfortunatly passed away when Kyle was in highschool.

"Okay!" Kyle shouted over the roaring of his friends, "Rule one! No sexual activity this evening, because the children are present!"

"DAMMIT!" Damien shouted.

"Put them in another room!" Craig laughed, wrapping an arm around his wife's shoulders.

Kyle shushed them again.

"Rule two!" he continued, "No talking dirty!"

Half the room groaned.

"Rule three..." Kyle finished with a smirk on his face, "No ripping on me for being a Jew."

The room exploded with laughter and shouting.

"f*cking Jew!"
"Great, thats my favorite rule!"
"Goddamn Jew!"
"Hey, Ky, let us see your Jew-fro!"

Kyle laughed and stepped down from the chair he'd been standing on. The kids were let back in and the party slightly quieted down.

Within minutes, Butters' son was asleep, along with Kayla.

Maura hurried up to Stan, who was sitting on the sofa with Wendy.

"Mommy, daddy!" she exclaimed excitedly, "I have a boyfriend now!"

Stan's face fell.

"It was bound to happen," Wendy sighed with a grin.

Stan took his daughter's hands, feeling the need to be protective.

"Who's your...b-boyfriend, honey?" he asked shakily.

Maura wriggled away and pulled Nate over.

Nate was blushing furiously. Stan sighed in relief, glad it was Kyle's kid.

Maura hugged Nate and the boy edged away, nervous.

His face was redder than his hair.

Wendy patted his head, "What a lucky little boy!"

Nate hurried away, Maura going after him.

"He's a lot like Kyle," Stan chuckled.

Wendy nodded in agreement.

Tweek's son, Twitch, was talking to Shiloh and Carmen.

"Where's YOUR mom?" Shiloh asked him.

Twitch pointed to a woman in a pink sweater.

"Thats her," he told them, "Her name is Lizzie, and she's getting a boob job. When she told my daddy, he screamed really loud and had to change his pants."

Kendra, who was eavesdropping, laughed.

"My daddy says thats a re'erection!" she grinned.

"MY daddy says its called a ele'erection," Shiloh snarled.

Kendra shrugged, tightening her orange scarf around her chin.

Carmen got up, not wanting to be around her sister at the moment. She walked, then bumped into two boys. It was Craig's son, and Clyde's. The two ignored her, and she shrugged it off and went to find some cheesy poofs.

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The next chapter will be up soon. ^^
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Postby nutmeg218 » Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:50 am

This is great!! It would make sense for Wendy and Stan's daughter to have an early boyfriend. I guess Stan's barfing habbit went away as he grew older, lol. Can't wait to read chapter 5!!!
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:55 am

Thanks!
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