The Biggest Love Triangle You Could Ever Read About!

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StanismyMan
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Postby StanismyMan » Sun Sep 17, 2006 9:50 pm

Man, I remember when this fic used to be 5 pages long, now it's in the 20s. Thats amazing how many chapters this has been through. I'm glad to be part of it.
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Postby Athena1999 » Sun Sep 17, 2006 9:52 pm

^I know, and it's lasted for... how long? Two months? This is just amazing.
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Postby DevilAngel16 » Sun Sep 17, 2006 10:25 pm

^Yes, it's been about two months since we started writing this. (We started in in July.) And to think that this entire fic sprouted from my sick, twisted, and insane idea on the "Do you like Stan/Kyle slash?" thread. XD Honestly though, without the help from Jori, I never would have considered even writing a slash fic, and now, I'm addicted to it! ^_______^

It makes me very happy that this fic is so popular. Thank you all so much for reading it!!! (I know I've said that before, but I really do appreciate that you all love this fic so much.) And of course an extra special thanks to Jori, who is a fantastic an awesome co-author. ^^

I can't wait for chapter 29 Jori. :D

Btw, just to let you all know, I started writing a new fic of my own the other day. I've officially given up on MATC because I have writer's block. >< My new fic is going to be different though. I'm actually going to finish it this time. XD I just started writing the first chapter, so I'm not sure when I'll be posting it. I'll be giving you all more details when I actually finish more of it. So...look for my new fic in the near future! ^_^
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Tue Sep 19, 2006 12:04 am

As Ali said, thank you guys so much for supporting this fanfic for the long time that its been up! Your all so awesome! I don't think I could've done this without Ali. She made up the ideas! I think she's a great author too. ^^ The next chapter should be up very soon. I'm trying to decide how the conversation/fight/make up of Cartman and Butters should go. I've got most of it though. :D I love keeping you all in suspense. It pleases me! XDDD
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Postby DownWithCalifornia » Tue Sep 19, 2006 12:55 am

Hmm.

So the current pairings are Kyle/Kenny, Cartman/Butters, Damien/Pip, Tweek/Wendy, onesided Token/Pip, and (MAINLY) onesided Stan/Kyle.

Original pairings were onesided Butters/Cartman, onesided Kenny/Kyle, Damien/Pip, Tweek/Wendy, onesided Kyle/Stan, onesided Cartman/Stan, onesided Token/Pip, and onesided Stan/Kenny.

Wow, this thing has changed a lot since you guys started it.
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Postby Athena1999 » Tue Sep 19, 2006 1:13 am

^I've mainly been following the Pip triangle... but yeah, the other boys' storylines have changed quite a bit!
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Tue Sep 19, 2006 1:36 am

*head implodes* GAHHHH!
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Postby DevilAngel16 » Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:25 pm

XD Yeah, you got it right DownWithCalifornia. This story really did change a lot since the first few chapters. It just gets better and better as time goes on. ^_^

Thank you Jori. You're a great author as well. ^^ I look forward to reading the next chapter. :D
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Wed Sep 20, 2006 10:51 pm

Sorry for making you all wait! But oooooo, it's SOOO worth it. This chapter is going to have A LOT, so be sure not to get confused, okay?

Here it is! Chapter 29!
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Cartman hobbled over to the caller's house.

It was Token.

"What do you want?" Cartman asked as he sat in a chair after Token let him in.

"Why the hell did you quit?" Token asked, pacing the floor.

Cartman swallowed a lump in his throat.

"For my own reasons," he answered hesitantly.

"f*ck your own reasons!" Token snarled, grabbing Cartman by the collar, "You listen, and you listen good, Tubby!"

Cartman wanted to run like hell, but was afraid of the conseqences.

"You're GOING to break up Pip and Damien," Token continued, "I don't care how. Lying, dressing up, murder. I don't give a damn. Just get it done by next week."

Cartman blinked.

"How do you expect me to do it by ne-"

"JUST DO IT!" Token growled, and then pulled Cartman up by the arm.

He lead him to the door and opened it.

"And, Tubby," he said, "If you don't do this, my men will see about it."

Cartman gulped, not wanting to know about these 'men'.

"W-whats in it for me?" he asked boldly.

"Your life," answered Token grimly before shoving him out the door.

Cartman limped down the steps, a look of pure horror on his face.

"Jesus Christ..."

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Please don't hate me, Stan...

This is what Kyle was thinking as he sat on the McCormick's couch with Kenny. The blonde was gingerly kissing his neck and cheeks while Kyle was deep in thought. The living room was dark, and they were alone.

Why am I here with Kenny? Kyle wondered to himself, absently allowing Kenny to take his clothes off, I can't believe I'm deliberatly deceiving my best friend-no, the love of my life...

Kenny got on top of Kyle and Kyle's mind was clouded with his guilt. Suddenly, the phone rang.

Kenny answered it.

"Hello?" he asked, "Oh, Stan. Not now, me and Kyle are fuc-"

He quickly slammed the phone down on the reciever.

"Crap!" he squeaked.

Kyle gasped and pushed Kenny off of him. The two scrambled into their clothes and exited the house.

As they walked down the street, Kenny groaned.

"Maaan," he whined, "Just as I was getting hard, too."

Kyle made a face, not at all aroused.

Stan suddenly rode up on his bike. When he saw his two friends, he got off of it and slammed his bike down into the pavement.

"You and Kyle were WHAT?" he demanded, approaching Kenny with a deadly glare, "HUH?!"

He shoved Kenny to the asphalt.

"What exactly were you guys doing?" he growled, "f*cking? RIGHT?!"

He whipped around, narrowing his eyes at Kyle.

Kyle shook his head slowly.

"N-no, Stan," his lip quivered, "It's not what you think.."

Stan swung his fist at Kyle and Kyle took the blow. But Stan didn't hit very hard. His shoulders shook.

"Why, Kyle?" His voice was a pitiful sob.

Kyle burst into tears and threw his arms around Stan.

"I'm sorry!" he cried, "Please, Stan, I love you! Please!"

Kenny, sitting on the ground, felt a violent pang of jealousy.

Stan stared blankly at the ground as Kyle kissed all of his visible skin and begged for forgiveness. Then he finally pulled away.

"S-stay the hell away from me," Stan choked out and turned away.

He got on his bike and raced down the street.

Kenny got up, his expression fierce.

"You don't really care!" he snarled at the redhead.

"N-no, Kenny," Kyle sobbed, "Please d-don't do this!"

Kenny kicked snow at Kyle and stormed away.

Kyle was alone.

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Cartman sat in his house once again, deep in thought. He was remembering the heartfelt interrogation that he and Butters had gone through the day before...

Cartman and Butters sat on Butters' porch, silent.

"Why did you do it?" Cartman asked, finally breaking the quiet.

Butters' face turned red and he looked down at the snow. His shaggy blonde hair hung down.

"I couldn't take it anymore," he gulped.

Cartman turned to look at him, a disgusted look on his face.

"You took my trust, Butters!" he scowled, "And my dignity! Not to mention my virginity.."

He added the last comment under his breath.

Butters frowned.

"I-I'm real sorry, Eric..."

"Sorry isn't good enough!" Cartman snapped.

Butters suddenly sucked it up and stood.

"Now I'm getting p-pretty sick 'a this!" he shouted, "You k-know, this is all y-your fault!"

Cartman's eyes widened.

"My fault?! How the hell do you figure that?"

Butters crossed his arms tightly over his chest.

"All my l-life, since we was babies, you've b-been takin' advantage of m-me!" he said, "And getting me i-in trouble while your at i-it!"

Cartman glanced down, knowing it was all true.

"You've g-gotten me grounded, made m-my parents beat me!" Butters continued, "G-gaven me lyposuction, m-made me attach f-fake balls to my c-chin, pretend to die and be a gir-"

"Okay!" Cartman cut him off, "I get it!"

The two sat quietly for a moment, staring at eachother.

"But you had to do that?" Cartman asked quietly.

Butters shrugged.

"It was the only thing that would hit you real h-hard."

"Yeah, well," Cartman chuckled sarcastically, "I hope your happy, because that hit me REALLY hard."

Butters sniffled and scooted closer to him.

"I also d-did it because...I love you, Eric."

Cartman blushed in surprise. He knew that Butters liked him--but loved him?!

"I-I like you too Butters," Cartman said hesitantly.

Butters confused look became serious.

"You know thats not what I mean."

Cartman winced as Butters gently turned him and brushed his lips against his neck.

"What do you think of m-me, Eric?"

Cartman looked down.

"I need to think. Just...give me time to think."

Butters smiled smally, finding that better than nothing. He slowly hugged Cartman...and Cartman hugged back.


Cartman sighed, finding his face warm from the memory. Did he love Butters?

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Stan was very depressed. He sat in his bedroom, looking through his photo album. He couldn't believe what Kyle had done. Was doing. Did.

Ugh, Stan thought, Forget it.

He came to a picture of himself and Kyle. He made a face and turned the page quickly. As he looked at the next photo, a smile spread on his face. He was getting an idea. A great idea.

"Maybe I can make Kyle a little...jealous," he chuckled as he gazed at the picture of the blonde boy, "Just a little..."

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Hope you all liked it! Sorry it had more drama then comedy, but whatever. XP I hope the conversation between Cartman and Butters cleared up all your confusion! Good luck with the next chapter, Ali. ^^
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Postby Athena1999 » Wed Sep 20, 2006 11:22 pm

What a lovely long chapter! Could Kenny's judgement have been so clouded by Kyle that he couldn't cover up the fact that he was having sex with Kyle? Kenny, you fool... you don't go and tell everyone! XD

Hmmm, I wonder if Butters was half-infatuated, half-vengeful. Cartman is finally getting what he's deserving! I wonder if he does love Butters. That might be a little awkward at first, but I know Butters will certainly enjoy it!

I wonder what Stan's going to do to that picture of Kenny? And I especially wonder how Cartman is going to break up the greatest couple in existence (Pip x Damien, who else did you think? :P)

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! ^________^
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Wed Sep 20, 2006 11:28 pm

Heehee. All the excitment continues in...

THE BIGGEST LOVE TRIANGLE YOU COULD EVER READ ABOUT!


Whoooo!

Commercialism!
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Postby DevilAngel16 » Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:10 am

*stands up and applauds* Bravo, bravo!!!

*sighs deeply* Wow...just wow. That was...

...intense. XD

That was amazingly well written Jori. As you said, it was definitely well worth the wait.

I don't know what to say. Astounding. You took my breath away. XD Seriously.

I really admire your vivid and fluent use of words. It's like, you painted a picture for me in my mind. I was able to imagine this perfectly as I read it. This chapter made me all tingly inside. ^^

Excellent job. Superb. Wonderful.

I look forward to writing the next chapter. ^_^
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Thu Sep 21, 2006 1:18 am

Wow, thanks so much! :D I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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Postby clenskiddlehopper » Thu Sep 21, 2006 4:32 am

OMG! I loved it! I'm super serial! Now, even at a dramatic chjapter like this I laughed, but then I laugh at everything.
This really made my day even if it is only 6:31 AM. seriose. im quiet sick, and i feel a little better after reading this!! can't wait for the next chapter ^.^
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Postby jawmht » Thu Sep 21, 2006 8:04 am

DAAAMMMMM, I have been reading for 3 hours straigh and it is good.

I want to put ths on my website as a single doc, Ill wait for permission though, and i will stop when i get any objections.

So someone tell me if i'm allowed or not.
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