It makes me very happy that this fic is so popular. Thank you all so much for reading it!!! (I know I've said that before, but I really do appreciate that you all love this fic so much.) And of course an extra special thanks to Jori, who is a fantastic an awesome co-author. ^^
I can't wait for chapter 29 Jori.
Btw, just to let you all know, I started writing a new fic of my own the other day. I've officially given up on MATC because I have writer's block. >< My new fic is going to be different though. I'm actually going to finish it this time. XD I just started writing the first chapter, so I'm not sure when I'll be posting it. I'll be giving you all more details when I actually finish more of it. So...look for my new fic in the near future! ^_^
Jimmy made corn into crack? THEN HELL YES, I CARE![/center]
So the current pairings are Kyle/Kenny, Cartman/Butters, Damien/Pip, Tweek/Wendy, onesided Token/Pip, and (MAINLY) onesided Stan/Kyle.
Original pairings were onesided Butters/Cartman, onesided Kenny/Kyle, Damien/Pip, Tweek/Wendy, onesided Kyle/Stan, onesided Cartman/Stan, onesided Token/Pip, and onesided Stan/Kenny.
Wow, this thing has changed a lot since you guys started it.
Here it is! Chapter 29!
Cartman hobbled over to the caller's house.
It was Token.
"What do you want?" Cartman asked as he sat in a chair after Token let him in.
"Why the hell did you quit?" Token asked, pacing the floor.
Cartman swallowed a lump in his throat.
"For my own reasons," he answered hesitantly.
"f*ck your own reasons!" Token snarled, grabbing Cartman by the collar, "You listen, and you listen good, Tubby!"
Cartman wanted to run like hell, but was afraid of the conseqences.
"You're GOING to break up Pip and Damien," Token continued, "I don't care how. Lying, dressing up, murder. I don't give a damn. Just get it done by next week."
"How do you expect me to do it by ne-"
"JUST DO IT!" Token growled, and then pulled Cartman up by the arm.
He lead him to the door and opened it.
"And, Tubby," he said, "If you don't do this, my men will see about it."
Cartman gulped, not wanting to know about these 'men'.
"W-whats in it for me?" he asked boldly.
"Your life," answered Token grimly before shoving him out the door.
Cartman limped down the steps, a look of pure horror on his face.
Please don't hate me, Stan...
This is what Kyle was thinking as he sat on the McCormick's couch with Kenny. The blonde was gingerly kissing his neck and cheeks while Kyle was deep in thought. The living room was dark, and they were alone.
Why am I here with Kenny? Kyle wondered to himself, absently allowing Kenny to take his clothes off, I can't believe I'm deliberatly deceiving my best friend-no, the love of my life...
Kenny got on top of Kyle and Kyle's mind was clouded with his guilt. Suddenly, the phone rang.
Kenny answered it.
"Hello?" he asked, "Oh, Stan. Not now, me and Kyle are fuc-"
He quickly slammed the phone down on the reciever.
"Crap!" he squeaked.
Kyle gasped and pushed Kenny off of him. The two scrambled into their clothes and exited the house.
As they walked down the street, Kenny groaned.
"Maaan," he whined, "Just as I was getting hard, too."
Kyle made a face, not at all aroused.
Stan suddenly rode up on his bike. When he saw his two friends, he got off of it and slammed his bike down into the pavement.
"You and Kyle were WHAT?" he demanded, approaching Kenny with a deadly glare, "HUH?!"
He shoved Kenny to the asphalt.
"What exactly were you guys doing?" he growled, "f*cking? RIGHT?!"
He whipped around, narrowing his eyes at Kyle.
Kyle shook his head slowly.
"N-no, Stan," his lip quivered, "It's not what you think.."
Stan swung his fist at Kyle and Kyle took the blow. But Stan didn't hit very hard. His shoulders shook.
"Why, Kyle?" His voice was a pitiful sob.
Kyle burst into tears and threw his arms around Stan.
"I'm sorry!" he cried, "Please, Stan, I love you! Please!"
Kenny, sitting on the ground, felt a violent pang of jealousy.
Stan stared blankly at the ground as Kyle kissed all of his visible skin and begged for forgiveness. Then he finally pulled away.
"S-stay the hell away from me," Stan choked out and turned away.
He got on his bike and raced down the street.
Kenny got up, his expression fierce.
"You don't really care!" he snarled at the redhead.
"N-no, Kenny," Kyle sobbed, "Please d-don't do this!"
Kenny kicked snow at Kyle and stormed away.
Kyle was alone.
Cartman sat in his house once again, deep in thought. He was remembering the heartfelt interrogation that he and Butters had gone through the day before...
Cartman and Butters sat on Butters' porch, silent.
"Why did you do it?" Cartman asked, finally breaking the quiet.
Butters' face turned red and he looked down at the snow. His shaggy blonde hair hung down.
"I couldn't take it anymore," he gulped.
Cartman turned to look at him, a disgusted look on his face.
"You took my trust, Butters!" he scowled, "And my dignity! Not to mention my virginity.."
He added the last comment under his breath.
"I-I'm real sorry, Eric..."
"Sorry isn't good enough!" Cartman snapped.
Butters suddenly sucked it up and stood.
"Now I'm getting p-pretty sick 'a this!" he shouted, "You k-know, this is all y-your fault!"
Cartman's eyes widened.
"My fault?! How the hell do you figure that?"
Butters crossed his arms tightly over his chest.
"All my l-life, since we was babies, you've b-been takin' advantage of m-me!" he said, "And getting me i-in trouble while your at i-it!"
Cartman glanced down, knowing it was all true.
"You've g-gotten me grounded, made m-my parents beat me!" Butters continued, "G-gaven me lyposuction, m-made me attach f-fake balls to my c-chin, pretend to die and be a gir-"
"Okay!" Cartman cut him off, "I get it!"
The two sat quietly for a moment, staring at eachother.
"But you had to do that?" Cartman asked quietly.
"It was the only thing that would hit you real h-hard."
"Yeah, well," Cartman chuckled sarcastically, "I hope your happy, because that hit me REALLY hard."
Butters sniffled and scooted closer to him.
"I also d-did it because...I love you, Eric."
Cartman blushed in surprise. He knew that Butters liked him--but loved him?!
"I-I like you too Butters," Cartman said hesitantly.
Butters confused look became serious.
"You know thats not what I mean."
Cartman winced as Butters gently turned him and brushed his lips against his neck.
"What do you think of m-me, Eric?"
Cartman looked down.
"I need to think. Just...give me time to think."
Butters smiled smally, finding that better than nothing. He slowly hugged Cartman...and Cartman hugged back.
Cartman sighed, finding his face warm from the memory. Did he love Butters?
Stan was very depressed. He sat in his bedroom, looking through his photo album. He couldn't believe what Kyle had done. Was doing. Did.
Ugh, Stan thought, Forget it.
He came to a picture of himself and Kyle. He made a face and turned the page quickly. As he looked at the next photo, a smile spread on his face. He was getting an idea. A great idea.
"Maybe I can make Kyle a little...jealous," he chuckled as he gazed at the picture of the blonde boy, "Just a little..."
Hope you all liked it! Sorry it had more drama then comedy, but whatever. XP I hope the conversation between Cartman and Butters cleared up all your confusion! Good luck with the next chapter, Ali. ^^
Jimmy made corn into crack? THEN HELL YES, I CARE![/center]
Hmmm, I wonder if Butters was half-infatuated, half-vengeful. Cartman is finally getting what he's deserving! I wonder if he does love Butters. That might be a little awkward at first, but I know Butters will certainly enjoy it!
I wonder what Stan's going to do to that picture of Kenny? And I especially wonder how Cartman is going to break up the greatest couple in existence (Pip x Damien, who else did you think? )
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! ^________^
*sighs deeply* Wow...just wow. That was...
That was amazingly well written Jori. As you said, it was definitely well worth the wait.
I don't know what to say. Astounding. You took my breath away. XD Seriously.
I really admire your vivid and fluent use of words. It's like, you painted a picture for me in my mind. I was able to imagine this perfectly as I read it. This chapter made me all tingly inside. ^^
Excellent job. Superb. Wonderful.
I look forward to writing the next chapter. ^_^
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