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Postby albino.black.sheep » Sun Nov 05, 2006 6:13 pm

Awesome chapter, Ali!

I love the Cartman/Butters pairing! Token can't break them up?! Can he?! :D
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Postby jawmht » Sun Nov 05, 2006 6:48 pm

SUSPENSE! You BUILT suspense then ended the STORY! You are definatly a teaser, not a pleaser‼! Nice chapter though.
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:24 pm

Great chapter, Ali! AND NOW, the chapter you perverts have all been waiting for...

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Cartman sat down, a determined look on his face.

"Butters," he began, "You love me? Right?"

Butters giggled, "O' course, silly!"

"And I love you," Cartman smiled weakly, "I love you a lot."

Butters blushed, clasping his hands together. Suddenly, he looked as if he remembered something.

"Oh!" he said, "Look! I-its your Christmas present. I wanna give it t-to you now."

He gave Cartman a basket.

It had movie tickets, coupons for dinner and ice cream, a book on dating, and more fun toys.

"Wow," Cartman chuckled, "Thanks a lot. Sorry...I haven't gotten your present yet..."

"Don't worry about it!" Butters gulped, "Christmas i-is still a week a-away!"

Cartman put the basket on the ground.

"Butters?" he asked quietly.

"Huh?" Butters replied.

Cartman took his chin in his hand and kissed him. Butters kissed him back, and the two fell back on the bed. Cartman climbed on top of him and Butters gasped in surprise.

He felt his shirt being tugged off, and understood what was going on. After both their shirts were off, the making out commenced.

Cartman's eyes shot open as he felt Butters' hand travel down the front of his pants.

"E-eric?" Butters asked, "Is that o-okay?"

"Just keep going," Cartman replied, kissing him again.

Butters obeyed.

Cartman moaned in between kisses to signify that all was well. Butters felt like the happiest guy on Earth. He was getting was he'd always wanted.

Unfortunately, the lock on Butters' door didn't work.

As the boys discarded their pants and prepared to go all the way, someone burst in.

It was Stan and Kenny.

"HEY GUYS, GUESS WHAT WE FOUND O-" Kenny cut himself off, staring at the two boys in disbelief.

Butters pulled his hand away from Cartman's lowers.

"Aw, hamburgers..." he muttered.

Cartman scrambled to cover himself and Butters with the blanket.

Stan had a disgusted look on his face.

"What the f*ck is going on?!" he asked in shock.

"GET THE HELL OUT, HOMOS!" Cartman screamed.

"Look who's talking!" Kenny laughed.

Cartman blushed angrily.

Kenny suddenly smirked and shut the door, locking it.

"Let me and Stan join in," he suggested.

Stan made a face.

"Uh, Kenny?" he asked, seeing Kenny's serious expression.

Kenny grabbed Stan's shoulders and shoved him on the bed.

Cartman and Butters watched in amazement, wondering what would happen.

"Wait, Kenny," Stan pleaded weakly as Kenny's hand slid down his pants, "We're not even..."

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Kyle chewed on his dinner quietly. He glanced at his parents, who were talking cheerfully to one another. The kosher meat in his mouth tasted sour.

Ike noticed Kyle's troubled look, and decided to talk to him about it later.

After dinner and chores, Ike went into Kyle's bedroom.

"Is something wrong?" he asked.

Kyle looked up, having a feeling that Ike might just know everything.

"Yeah," Kyle sighed, patting the spot on the bed next to him.

Ike sat.

"I...I got a girl pregnant," Kyle confessed.

Ike wasn't too surprised. Not much about Kyle surprised him anymore.

"Are you gonna keep it?" he asked.

Kyle shrugged.

Would he keep it?

***

Token sat in his bedroom, angry as hell.

"Why is it that every person I want is already taken?!" he asked himself.

As he paced his bedroom, an idea came to mind. He grabbed his phone and dialed a number.

"Hello," he said after a few moments, "Can I speak to...Ze Mole? It's important."

He waited.

"Christophe, are you interested in making a few hundred dollars?" he asked slyly.

***

Wendy sat at her house with Tweek, teaching him to sew.

"And you put the thread through the needle, sweetie," she advised, "Yes, thats it."

Tweek tried his best to follow her instructions. He wanted to make the best impression possible since he was going to be a father soon.

"Tweek, I was thinking," Wendy smiled, "What should we name the baby?"

Tweek jumped, shaking violently.

"OH JESUS!" he screamed, "How should I know?!"

Wendy laughed and continued sewing.

***

Pip and Damien walked down the snowy street, hand-in-hand.

"Isn't it a beautiful night, love?" Pip asked dreamily.

"Yeah," Damien replied.

The two turned to eachother and kissed.

"Darling," Damien sighed, "I have something...to confess."

Pip frowned.

"As do I."

The two were silent for a few moments, but then both blurted out at the same time;

"I love Tweek!"

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Oh my, conflict! I hope you all liked it. For my first sex scene, I don't think I did too terrible. Good luck on the next chapter, Ali! ^^
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Postby albino.black.sheep » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:29 pm

EEP!

That was a gooooooooooooooooooood chapter!! It's all getting hella-cool!
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:31 pm

^Whoa! Fast reply! Thanks a lot.
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Postby albino.black.sheep » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:34 pm

What can I say? I'm a quick typer and a faster reader!

I love the interactions between Ike and Kyle! I always wonder what Ike would be like if he were coherent.

And Cartman with Butters is such a sweet guy. If only he weren't a little sh*t the rest of the time.
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:40 pm

^I agree.


I was thinking of doing an incest thing, but then I thought that would be really strange and complicated. I'm not too big a fan of Kyle/Ike. I just think its really adorable when they interact.

And Cartman hasn't been too mean in the fic lately. He's been really laid back, surprisingly. I love how he cares so much for Butters, and vice versa.

*sigh*
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Postby albino.black.sheep » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:44 pm

Totally.

Kyle is my favourite character out of the show, because I identify with him so much! LOL!

It's actually good to see Ike included in fanfic, because most people have no imagination and prefer to leave him out rather than have to think about what he's really like.

Good job!
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:50 pm

Yeah, thats definite.

I don't see Ike too often in fanfics. I agree, I'm glad that we put him in here.
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Postby misscutiepie1330 » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:50 pm

I'm squealing like a fan girl now! I loved that chapter, Jori! (the CartmanxButters scene got me really hot, nice job at that) and...it was just thuper! EEEEEEEEE!!!!

*fangirlishness drowns Haley in fangirly squeals and fangirly thoughts*
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:56 pm

:D I'm very glad you liked it, dear!


After you two, I'm interested to see how everyone else will react to this chapter. Hehehe....*dark thoughts*
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Postby misscutiepie1330 » Sun Nov 05, 2006 10:04 pm

Your welcome, hun :wink:

Seriously, that chapter was uber pwnage, Jori. I just love it! :D

EEEEEEEE!!!! *Again, Haley is drowned in more fangirlishness*
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sun Nov 05, 2006 10:17 pm

*pulls you out of the fangirlishness*


GOD, DON'T DROWN! DDDD:
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Postby StanismyMan » Sun Nov 05, 2006 11:59 pm

JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORI! I loved it to bits! When I was reading the part when they walk in on Butters, I was giggling so hard. I had my hand up to my mouth. XD

I looooooved that chapter. I can just see a whole bunch of problems arising from that one. I feel so fangirlish right now. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

I need to hug someone. XDD
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Mon Nov 06, 2006 12:00 am

Hug meeee!


And thanks!
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