First of all, I would recommend checking for spelling and grammar, as I spotted a lot of problems with that, including the way you spelled "Stewart" and even sentences that just stopped before they were over.
And this fic ended too quickly, without answering some questions: Why the hell were there mutants? Why couldn't this base defend against one ship?
Anyways, good job, I got hooked on the story, although I would have liked for there to have been more.
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