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Super South Park Kids

Postby omgtkkyb1992 » Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:18 am

OK this is my 2nd one although Stan and Wendy one is still being worked on.
Ill put it into about 5 chapters or so.

It starts out the boys are lying in a field looking up at the stars.

Stan: Dude tonight is great for star gazing.
Cartman: Oh crap i just saw a UFO!
Kyle: Dude thats a satellite.
Cartman: Ohhhh
Suddenly the sky covered with clouds and a loud thunder cracked.

Kenny: (Awww)
Stan: Well lets go home.
Everyone gets up except Cartman.

Kyle: Cartman are you coming?
Cartman: No way dude its impossible to get struck by lightning.
Kyle: What the f*ck are you talking about!
Cartman then gets up and gets in Kyles face.

Cartman: You cant get struck by lightning jew!
Kyle:Yes you can fatass
Cartman: No you cant!
Kyle: YES YOU CAN!
Cartman: bet you 20 bucks you cant!
Kyle: Fine its on, Stan Kenny get over here.
Stan: What?
By this time all the boys are covered with rain and some of the hair is showing.

Kyle: Get on Cartmans shoulders.
Stan: Dude if i get killed im kicking your ass in heaven.
Stan gets on Cartmans shoulders and then Kyle gets on Stans and Kenny get on top.

Cartman: Well look were ok well jew it look like you owe me.
Just then a bolt of lightning strikes blowing the boys in every direction. A while passes by and then Kyle awakens.

Kyle: Ohh sh*t my head wha what happened.
He notices Stan on the ground and runs over to him.
Kyle: Dude are you ok.
Stan: Ugh Kyle?
Kyle: Dude your ok!
Stan: Where the hell are we?
Kyle: I think were in a field.
Stan: Why would we be in a field.
Kyle then looks behind him to see Cartman and Kenny sitting down rubbing their heads.

Kyle: CARTMAN!
Cartman: Uh?
Kyle: What did you do this time you fat assh*le!
Cartman: I didnt do nothing!
Kyle: Then why are we in a field!
Cartman: I dont f*cking know!
Kyle: God your so f*cking stupid!
Cartman: Ok that dose it screw you guys ima going home.
Cartman gets up and walks away he trips over a rock on his walk he picks it up and hurls it well over 300 feet. He then stares at what he just did.

Kenny: (Holy sh*t!)
Kyle: Damn how did you do that.
Cartman: I just did this.
Cartman picks up another rock and throws it the same distance.

Stan: Wow dude.
Cartman: Wait a minuet what if us being struck by lightning gave us super powers!
Kyle: Dude it had to have!
Cartman: Well all i know for sure is one of us can fly for sure. I think its Kenny!
Kenny: (That would be f*cking sweet)
Kyle: How do we find out?
Cartman: Duh we throw him off a building!
Kenny: We do what!
It then shows the boys on top of a building Kenny is standing at the edge of the building.

Kyle: Here we are dude the south park district building the highest point of south park.
Kenny: (Awwww)
Cartman: Ready Kenny!
Kenny: No.
Cartman: Good lets go!
Cartman runs up and pushes Kenny off. Kenny falls to the ground.

Kenny: (AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PWHWU!)
Back up on the building.

Stan: Oh my god Cartman killed Kenny!
Kyle: You bastard.
Stan: Quick lets go down their.
The boys walk down and go to the elevator.

Stan: Damn i wish this elavator didnt take so long.
Stan then starts thinking and the elavator flys down to the bottom floor.

Kyle: Woha dude how did you do that!
Stan: Dude i know my power i can do things with my mind!
Kyle: Sweet lets go check on Kenny.
The boys go out the main door and see Kenny sitting up still alive.

Stan: Holy sh*t your still alive.
Kenny: ( I think so)
Cartman: Wait a minuet. Kenny you have the power of invincibility! Which means Kyle can you put your hand in the air and jump!
Kyle puts his hand up and jumps he goes 10 feet off the ground and hovers their.

Kyle: Sweet i can fly!
Cartman: Listen boy we all have super powers and this means we have to use are powers to help others for we are the SUPER SOUTH PARK KIDS!

To be continued.
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby ximena949 » Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:22 am

I like it so far.Keep it going :wink:
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby omgtkkyb1992 » Wed Dec 05, 2007 9:41 pm

Well time to put out another part.

Later on the boys are walking down the street.

Cartman: Dude my super power is so the coolest!
And then butters walks over.

Butters: Hey fellers
Stan: Hey butters >.>
Butters: What are you guys doin!
Cartman:Were being superheros!
Butters: OH boy can i play
Cartman: Its not a game dumbass were really super come on guys lets ditch this f@g.
They walk away leaving butters
Butters: I think id make a good super hero but at times like these its why im forced to this to be.
Butters walks away while saying this he gets to his house and goes up the stairs goes into his closet and comes out as.

Butters: PROFESSOR CHAOS! Muhahaha
Butters then runs down stairs and outside.
Then back at the bus stop.

Kyle: Hey guys check this out
Kyle jumps up floats over the street and flys back.

Stan:Oh yeah well.
Uses his powers to take the sign out of the ground with his mind.

Cartman: Let a real man do this.
Cartman picks up a rock and chucks it.
Back at butters front yard.

Butters: Pre pare heros for i am coming and then IUGH.
The rock cartman threw smacks right into butters forehead sending him to the ground.
Once more back at the bus stop.

Kyle: Dude i think you hit someone.
Cartman: Oh well they asked for it.
Stan: From 300 feet away.
Cartman: Shhhh i just got the best idea ever! We should go out and help someone in south park how is in trouble. Then we all meet back hear it would kick ass.
Stan: Dude thats a great idea lets go.
All the boys run in different ways.

Ok break time ill write more in a bit
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby candies » Thu Dec 06, 2007 12:05 am

Great writer as a beginner ( As if I would write a story like this :) ) keep continue with this, It's really enjoyable to read.
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby 203177 » Sat Dec 08, 2007 4:21 am

Good so far keep going! :wink:

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My favorite sp characters: Bridon(he's so cute!)
Kyle,Stan, Kenny/Mysterion.

Fave ep: ESM Season 12,Sec fave: Butterballs Season 16
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby omgtkkyb1992 » Wed Dec 12, 2007 2:39 am

Wow im seeing lots of views time to add more.

Kyle walks over to see a old woman in front of the street.

Kyle:Excuse me mam do you need help crossing the road?
Old lady: Yes thank you.
Kyle picks her up and flys threw the air and lands on the other side but smacking the old lady's head off the top of a lamp post.
He then puts her down on the other side of the street.

Kyle: Their you go mam!
Kyle then flys off. On another part of town Stan is walking and he says Craig and Clyde arguing.
Stan: Hey whats wrong.
Clyde: This ass hole kicked the ball over the fence!
Craig: I said i was sorry dick!
Stan: No need to fight any more for im here!
Stan points his finger at the fence he brings the ball up with his mind and hurls the ball right into Craig's face sending him to the ground.

Clyde: Wow that was kickass!
Stan: No need to thank me im a super hero its what i do!.
Stan the walks off.

Clyde: Hey Craig lets play.......Craig?
Off on another part of town Kenny is walking and he sees a large amount of people outside a building which has caught on fire he then walks over and talks to one of the woman out side crying.

Kenny: (What the f*ck is going on)
Woman: Help my son is in their hes only 6 months old!!
Kenny: (Have no fear Super Kenny is here!)
Kenny walks over into the building and with in a minuet he comes out holding a baby he walks over to the woman and hands her the baby.

Kenny:(Here you go mam!)
Woman: Oh thank you thank you.
Kenny walks off then girl then looks at the baby.

Woman: This isnt my baby!
She Throws the baby over her shoulder. Then the building collapses into it self.
Off in another part of town Cartman is walking past a doughnut store and sees a guy in a black suit run out holding the cash register with the clerk fall out the door.

Cartman: Whoa sh*t!
Store guy: Oh sh*t he got away!
Cartman: No way im gonna get that shitface.
Store guy: Now who the hell are you gonna do that sh*t?
Cartman: Check this sh*t out.
Cartman picks up a rock near the store and hucks it at the robber as he is running the rock smashes him in the back of the head and he falls down. Cartman walks over and picks up the register and walks back to the store Employee.

Cartman: Here you go.
Store guy: Oh thanks kid how can i ever thank you.
Cartman: You work at a doughnut shop you know what to do!
Store guy: Aww sh*t.

Meanwhile over at Butters house. Butters finally wakes up from the brick to the head.

Butters: Aww i feel weird.... wait the fellas where talking about powers and lightning AHA i must have been hit by lightning to!
I wonder what my power is i bet it is super speed.
Butters then begins to run at his normal speed then he stops.

Butters: I I I I DO HAVE SUPER POWERS prepare heros for i am the darkest most evil villain ever!
Butters then runs off to find the other.

Comments and stuff now???
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby 203177 » Thu Dec 13, 2007 12:33 am

Coming along good so far continue with it please! :)


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My favorite sp characters: Bridon(he's so cute!)
Kyle,Stan, Kenny/Mysterion.

Fave ep: ESM Season 12,Sec fave: Butterballs Season 16
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby omgtkkyb1992 » Sat Dec 15, 2007 11:30 pm

Part 4 coming up now.

The boys are talking back at the bus stop.

Cartman: What super thing did you do jew?
Kyle: I helped this old bitch across the road!
Cartman: Chht well i saved a dough nut store from a robbery what about you Kenny?
Kenny: (I saved this baby form a fire it was f*cking sweet!)
Cartman: And Stan what about you.
Stan: I helped Craig and Clyde get a ball from over a fence.
Its quiet for a few seconds.

Cartman: What type of bull crap hero work is that!
Stan: Wha..
Kyle: Thats all you did?
Cartman: Stan you can be a super hero until you do something good!
Stan: But i
Cartman: Come back when you do something useful you f*cking fruit!
Stan lowers his head puts his hands in his pocket and walks off. Then Butters arrives.

Butters: Muhahahaha!
Kyle: Butters?
Butters: Aww hamburgers how did you know it was me!
Cartman: We have long term memory and what the hell are you doing here!
Butters: Im here to beat you for recently i was struck by lightning.
Kyle: Their hasn't been a storm since last night!
Butters: But i was and look at my super power.
Butters starts running around at normal speed.

Kenny: (Huh)
Kyle: What power is that?
Butters: I have super speed!
Cartman: Well thats super gay LETS KILL HIM!
Butters: Oh crap!
Cartman runs up and hits butters in the face he slides back across the road. Butters gets to his feet then Kyle jumps up and swoops down slamming Butters to the ground. Kenny walks over to Butters laying on the ground and kicks him in the side. Then Cartman slams the crap out of Butters face.

Kyle: Cartman stop!
Cartman keeps going beating him up after about a minuet he stops.

Cartman: I think i over did it.
Kyle: NO sh*t!
Cartman: Crap we have to hide his body.
Kenny: (God we did it again)
Cartman: Ok lets dig a hole and chuck him in it.
Kyle: OK that works.
Cartman digs out a hole fast because of his strength then kyle throws him in they fill it in and walk off. A hour later.

Butters: Ugh were am i i i Awhaa WHAAAAAAAA! Help me!!!!
Stan is above the ground walking by and hears this.

Stan: Butters?
Butters: Stan help me please!!!
Stan thinks then Butters flys out from the ground and lands back down.

Butters: Oaf!
Stan: Dude what the hell were you doing underground!
Butters: I dont remember.
Stan: Wait come on!
Stan grabs Butters arm and walks over to the park with him were Kyle, Cartman and Kenny are swinging.

Stan: Guys look i found Butters underground and saved him so can i hang with you again!
Cartman: WHAT THE f*ck STAN!
Kyle: Dude you saved a arch rival!
Stan: Butters?
Cartman: God Dammit Stan you f*cked things up again!
Butters: Guys can i just be like a good guy now.
Cartman: Hmmmmm NO!
Kyle: Wait dude he could help us save people!
Cartman: We cant just make him one their has to be another storm!
Kyle: Yeah i heard on the news this morning their was gonna be!
Butters: Horay im gonna be a super hero!
Its then shows the boys all around the school play ground and Cartman ties a rope around Butters.

Cartman: Ok lets do this!
The boys pull on the other side of the rope Butters is hoisted into their air and he got to the top and his pants get stabbed threw the pointy top.

Cartman: Ok lets go guys.
Butters: Wait what about me!
Cartman: Well check on you in like a hour or so!
Kyle: Wait guys i got a awesome idea.
Stan: What is it.
Kyle: I heard on the news today as well that 11 American solders are being help in a cave in Iraq.
Stan: Sooo?
Kyle: We can use are super powers to save them!
Cartman: Yeah then we will be real awesome heros!
Stan: And everyone will know us!
Kyle: Come on guys lets go!
They all run off. Then a crack of thunder is heard.

Butters: WOW!

Only one more part left comments? questions?
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby 203177 » Sun Dec 16, 2007 9:35 pm

its good but try not to put into a script. try and make it into a story, if you can but anyway its turning out good please continue with it. :)


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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby omgtkkyb1992 » Sun Dec 16, 2007 11:35 pm

Im gonna finish in script and if i do make another story ill use story style anyway dramatic ending.

The boys are standing at the bus stop running threw the plan.

Stan: Ok guys here is what we do! 1st we send Kenny to kill the terrorist with his invinsability when hes done he will call on this cell back to us. 2nd I will teleport us their to untie the troops.
Cartman: Sounds pretty cool.
Kyle: Ready dude.
Kenny: ( I f*cking guess so!)

Terrorist: Akaham jehad!
The terrorist begin shooting at Kenny the bullets fly off then Kenny headbuts one of the terrorist in the nuts takes his gun and shoots the others. He then takes out the phone and calls back.

Stan: Hello
Kenny: All clear!
Stan hangs up the phone.

Stan: Ok lets do this.
Stan teleports them all their.

Kenny: (Hey guys)
Stan: Hey Kenny lets go untie those guys.
The boys work and untie them all.

Troop 1: Wow you kids saved us.
Stan: Ok were sending you back now.
Stan thinks then the troops get sent back.

Kyle: Guys we did a really good thing today!
Stan: Yeah now come on lets go home.
Stan begins to think and nothing happens.

Cartman: Uhhh
Stan: What the hell?
Kyle: Never mind ill fly us home.
Kyle Jumps in the air and lands back down.

Kyle: What the f*ck!
Cartman: Stupid jew ill throw us home then.
Cartman walk over and trys to lift up kyle but fails.

Cartman: LAME.
Stan: Dude we lost are powers!
Kyle: Wait if we lost are powers then.
All:KENNY!

Kenny is standing in front of terrorist.

Kenny: (Dont worry i got these guy...)
The terrorist shoot Kenny over and over again as the others run out of the base and get into a helicopter heading to America.

Cartman: Holy crap that was close.
Kyle: Hey Cartman!
Cartman: Ha haaa yeah?
Kyle: You owe me 20$s
Cartman: Hey Kyle *Farts*
Kyle and Stan: AWWWWW!
Back in America.

Steven: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING UP THEIR!
Butters: Im sorry.
Steven: You are grounded Butters.
Butters: I know!
Steven pulls on the rope and Butters falls to the ground.
Then he and his dad walk away. As they leave lightning strikes the poll.

END
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby tanktank » Sun Dec 16, 2007 11:59 pm

how about an episode where cartman goes to the future and stan and wendy are married kyle is a serial killer cartman is dead and simpsons reaches its 1000 episode which starts the apocylips
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby James--76 » Mon Dec 17, 2007 1:00 pm

tanktank wrote:how about an episode where cartman goes to the future and stan and wendy are married kyle is a serial killer cartman is dead and simpsons reaches its 1000 episode which starts the apocylips


I don`t think kyle would become a killer when he grows up maybe cartman would though


that was quite good that fic.
Kyle: Why? How could you do this? There are people starving in Alabama and you give Cartman a million dollars?

Cartman: Line? Lines! I HATE LINES!!!
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Re: Super South Park Kids

Postby polymorph » Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:44 am

tanktank wrote:how about an episode where cartman goes to the future and stan and wendy are married kyle is a serial killer cartman is dead and simpsons reaches its 1000 episode which starts the apocylips


That's not relevant at all.
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