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stan's mine, bitch!

Postby Butterslover21 » Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:38 am

hi! this is my secnd fanfic! this time, kyle and wendy fight for stan's love! superiorasvior came up with the title.

the actual story will probably be posted by tomorrow
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby Butterslover21 » Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:51 pm

okay, i'm making it up as i type:

stan and kyle are playing vieo games at stan's house. they here a knock on the door.
stan answers it, and it's wendy.

wendy: hi stan! are you ready for our date?

stan: aww, crap! i totally forgot about it!

wendy: what? how could you forget about me? what are you even doing?

stan: i'm playing video games with kyle...

wendy: stan, you've been spending too much time with him! get into a suit and take me out!

stan: fine.

as he walks to his room. kyle gets of the couch.

kyle: wendy, don't you think you were being a little mean?

wendy: no, i'm just trying to keep him straight. i have to make him take me out so he wont end up gay and so he'll realize i'm the one that he used to puke on!

to be continued...
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby i<3hart<3kenny_666 » Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:58 pm

nice
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby butters kenny » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:00 pm

cool
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby Delilah » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:11 pm

I like it! Maybe you should try to make chapters a little longer, though.
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby superiorsavior » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:15 pm

YAY for a bitchy wendy story! What's with her openness in that last line though? Why's she think Stan's gay? Is it that obvious :lol:
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby butters kenny » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:16 pm

yes,yes it is
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby Butterslover21 » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:17 pm

yeah, he spends so much time with kyle! even cartman noted in one episode that they were a cute couple, or something like that. i don't really think wendy is that bitchy, but she was a little snobby in the new episode
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby i<3hart<3kenny_666 » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:20 pm

drop it like its hot


cause its on fire
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby polymorph » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:20 pm

The concept is good (I always liked the idea of pitting Kyle and Wendy against each other)

This first scene is really brief, you don't have to write fifteen pages for one chapter but abit more than one quick entence would be nice.
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby Butterslover21 » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:23 pm

sorry, i couldn't really think of anything. i did say that i was making it up as i typed, so it might not be very good so far
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby butters kenny » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:26 pm

your butters fanfic was short too
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby Butterslover21 » Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:38 pm

sorry about my fanfics being so short. i never really have much time to work on them.
honk if you're f*cking steve carell (cause i really wish i was!)

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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby i<3hart<3kenny_666 » Thu May 01, 2008 11:06 pm

well i think theyre fine!
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Re: stan's mine, bitch!

Postby vampswillreignagain » Sun May 04, 2008 10:35 pm

yeah, sorry about the short and pretty crappy first chapter. hopefully, chapter two will be even better. sorry if it's too mushy with all of the romance

wendy and stan are at a really fancy restaraunt.

wendy: stan, don't you love me anymore? whatever happened to the days when you used to want to spend every minute with me? or when you'd get jealous of me being with another guy?

stan: that's just it. you broke up with me so fast, and then almost a day after that, you were already with another guy. and now you wanna get back together with me. make up your mind. do you love me or not?

wendy: look, i'm sorry. i just needed a little break from you. but just recentley i remembered how happy you made me... please stan, i wanna be your girlfriend...

she grabs his shoulders, and pulls him into a kiss. he then pukes on the table.

meanwhile, kyle, who secretly followed them, is watching them make out. when he sees smile appear on stans face, he leaves, whispering to himself, "and they said wendy wasn't a stupid spoiled whore..."

end of part 1 of chapter two

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