Kyle's Online Girlfriend

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Eaglesman2014
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby Eaglesman2014 » Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:42 pm

10/10
pissedoff0popo
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby pissedoff0popo » Wed May 13, 2009 12:07 am

aww dude nice =] except kyle's like my fave character lolz XD ummm why epic movie though? :D
Samthedude97
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby Samthedude97 » Wed May 13, 2009 12:28 am

CARTMAN
No... no! NOT DISASTER MOVIE!!!

KYLE
WATCH IT, BITCH! Watch every last second!

Cartman throws up.


Nice Story bra, go with christ :timmy:

But seriously, you should have made Kyle show him Family Guy...I like Disaster Movie :( , it's pretty funny but that's your opinion if you dont like it, nothing against you, dude. :D
Peg
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby Peg » Wed May 13, 2009 7:01 am

:lol:
Oh hi. So, how are you holding up? Because I'm a potato.
*slow clap*
husky_dog
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby husky_dog » Sat May 16, 2009 1:51 pm

An excellent start. But don't stop there. Add more dialog. Develop the relationship more between Kyle and the on-line girlfriend. Maybe add a reference back to earlier episodes such as Kenny talking about his short relationship with a fifth grader. You are on the right track. We want to read more.
breakfastmonkey
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby breakfastmonkey » Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:03 am

ahaha, disaster movie.
:]

this was well written.
and i was shocked at the torture.

i could see this in an episode.
McVulmer
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby McVulmer » Sun Jun 14, 2009 5:45 pm

Haha. This was cool :lol:
Tayzicon
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby Tayzicon » Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:59 pm

i have to say good job!
most fanfics are unimpressive but this is amazing!!!
butters kenny
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby butters kenny » Mon Jun 22, 2009 9:05 pm

Where's the humor?
I Wasn't choking you I was just hugging your neck

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RandomPicklez
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby RandomPicklez » Wed Jul 01, 2009 8:14 pm

That was really good. I loved the part where Kyle made Cartman watch Disaster Movie. That movie sucked so bad.
Congratulations, you got 1 million points! YOU...ARE...FAGS!!!!
Aquarius2
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby Aquarius2 » Mon Aug 17, 2009 2:59 am

Amazing! I can totally imagine that perfectly, the way things happened and they way everyone talked, it was awesome!
Cartman! Did you just say the F word?
Jew?
kylethejew57
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby kylethejew57 » Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:35 pm

Dude, KICKASS! Cartman dying... what a dream come true! lolz :lol:
skuhlar
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Re: Kyle's Online Girlfriend

Postby skuhlar » Fri Aug 28, 2009 10:12 pm

very nice. i like this :D

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