the time machine

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electoraljew2
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Re: the time machine

Postby electoraljew2 » Fri Feb 13, 2009 2:02 am

Just, letten ya know, I just ecided that this fic will be discontinued from southparkstudios.com. I will continue it here, My Fic. So, if you're gonna read it, read it their. This thread is over.
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Re: the time machine

Postby electoraljew2 » Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:45 pm

I deleted the story on there too. It will never be continued. I haven't even logged on here in two months. :D
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Re: the time machine

Postby butters kenny » Fri Apr 03, 2009 11:07 pm

Good because it was horrible
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Re: the time machine

Postby electoraljew2 » Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:12 pm

butters kenny wrote:Good because it was horrible



f*ck you.
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Re: the time machine

Postby haha_1 » Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:02 pm

it was good while it lasted, even if the charaters were a little out of place. i want more. in fact,i wanna see what stan's future is like
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Re: the time machine

Postby Gentle123 » Wed Apr 22, 2009 10:00 pm

I really did like it, I think it was very good, Its sad that you didn't finish it though, or I didn't find it earlier.
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electoraljew2
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Re: the time machine

Postby electoraljew2 » Sat May 30, 2009 1:40 pm

Some of you guys liked it...?! I already deleted it form fanfiction.net, I'll see if I ever feel like doing t again. I hope so for you guys, but right now I'm not really into SP as a whole at all, at this point I'm writing Naruto. I just happened to remember the fic today and check out the thread. Prob be another 2 months fore I log in again.

As for Stan, he was gonna be last. It was gonna be like 20 chaps or sometin... maybe I'll restart it... I'll check the thread again in a few weeks
electoraljew2
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Re: the time machine

Postby electoraljew2 » Sat May 30, 2009 1:49 pm

Btw, my writing style has changed alot since last writing this. Last thing 've written was 2 weeks ago, but it's Naruto. Check out the writing style, to see if u like.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4824130/11/

My writng is much more detailed now, and longer.

me u know- 600 words a chap, half line lines, manuscrpt form, bad grammer, bad spelling, retatrded plot

me now- 5,000 words a chap, 5 line paras, regular writing style ,average grammer, good spelling, descriptive/intelligent plot
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Re: the time machine

Postby haha_1 » Fri Jun 12, 2009 1:39 pm

you really gonna go on with this? well... as you know, the fics get better as your writing style gets better. you're a good man, i wonder if stan is married to wendy? coz then you know that you will have my full respect, and support! good luck!
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electoraljew2
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Re: the time machine

Postby electoraljew2 » Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:51 pm

hmmm... thanks, hopefully I'll re-start the fic by the end of the year.
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Re: the time machine

Postby electoraljew2 » Mon May 03, 2010 11:58 pm

is anybody still interested in this?
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Re: the time machine

Postby southparkaddicted24 » Fri May 14, 2010 10:12 pm

electoraljew2 wrote :
> is anybody still interested in this?

*Raises hand*
it was a good fic. I hate to watch anything die, especially a fic.

Plus, it would be good for your story to continue NOW, instead of two years ago, since your writing has probably improved a lot since then. I mean, I just found this old short story I wrote 2 years ago in my closet? And it sucked ass. And now I rock. xD

What, it doesn't hurt to be confident (and even a bit conceited, lol) once in a while, right?
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