Who's your daddy?

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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby willowrose » Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:18 pm

BigCamera4892 wrote:Greetings from my iPod Touch.

This iPod is great, but very hard to navigate on a BBS :(

My regular computer is down for awhile, so I can't make quotes or anything from this iPod :(

I enjoyed the chapter very much, with the plot switching between the house and the office, closing out the chapter in the shower. If I could figure out how to make quotes on this iPod, I would have quoted the part about Eric's caring of his own relationship until the baby was born of a different race, showing that Eric was cheated on and duped. (I can't easily go back and look from this iPod :( I am posting this all from my own memory, not from the computer's memory. And this keyboard is no picnic either, typing one character at a time with only my index finger to "type" with).

More later. My computer should be up again sometime tomorrow.

Happy Easter

-BC


Thank you!!

Eric becomes a pretty "major subplot" in this story. So little things about him will get touched on until it becomes more obvious what's going on. In fact quite a few things will be "touched on" that will later tie into the story as a whole. This world revolves around Matt and Trey but there's life going on around them too that will effect the way they handle things. ;)

Thank you again BC!!!! And I wish I had an iPod Touch!!!!!!!!! ;)
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Re: Who's your daddy? Chap 13

Postby willowrose » Sat Apr 11, 2009 7:09 pm

Warning: This chapter has curse words and subtle sexual content. None of it is pornographic. Please beware and approach accordingly. No new chapter on Sunday! The next chapter will be posted on Monday! Thank you.

Who's your daddy? chap 13
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"Ouch! sh*t!"

Trey turned over quickly and threw the light on.

"Matt? What's wrong?" He asked through a groggy voice. With his eyes barely coming into focus all he saw was a blurred vision of Matt standing on one foot by the bathroom door.

"Nothing." Matt growled. "I stubbed my damn toe."

"Why didn't you turn on a light?" Trey asked, his eyes still not wanting to open.

"Because."

"Because why?"

"Because I thought I knew my way around your room in the dark! Damn. This was like the twentieth time I've gotten up to piss. I'm getting sick of it!" Matt yelled.

"How bad did you hurt your toe?"

"Bad."

"How bad?"

"Bad enough for me to yell ouch and then sh*t." Matt said sarcastically.

"Bring your toe back to bed." Trey told him. Trey was, always had been, the first and if not only person to have nothing but complete patience with Matt. But at three o'clock in the morning, actually being able to sleep in his own bed, even Trey could get grumpy and frustrated.

Matt sulked his way back into the bed. He got in and pulled the covers up over his curls. Trey turned the lights off and laid there for a moment. Matt didn't say anything and he didn't move. Trey laid there a moment more. Still nothing. Trey got under the blanket and kissed Matt's back. He didn't bother waiting for a response. He kissed down Matt's hip, over his leg, and finally to his toes.

"Which toe was it?" Trey asked, slouching under the covers at Matt's feet.

"My little toe." Matt mumbled.

"This one?" Trey asked, touching Matt's little toe on his right foot.

"Ouch. Yes." Matt groaned, but in more of a "baby me" way.

Trey kissed Matt's little toe. He then licked it. And then kissed it again. Matt didn't say anything. Trey, staying under the covers, grabbed Matt's side and pushed him to his back. Matt stayed silent under the covers. That didn't matter. Trey's mouth slowly made it's way over the rest of Matt's body.

There was no set time for them to wake up the next morning. They both had a hard time falling back to sleep. Matt was still constantly getting up every half hour to pee and Trey was more aware of it now so couldn't fall back to sleep. But as the light started peeking in from between the beautiful drapes that were over Trey's windows, one of his eyes came part way open to greet it. He then cursed at it.

"f*ck" Trey mumbled as his finger rubbed at his still closed eye. He tried to shift a little but immediately realized he couldn't. Matt was snuggled tightly against him, wrapped over his other arm, his face still sound asleep against Trey's chest. Now that Trey was awake he realized the arm that Matt was sleeping on top of was numb.

"Matt," Trey whispered. Matt didn't notice. He tried slowly pulling his arm out from under him. Matt stirred a little so he paused. Once he saw Matt wasn't going to wake up, he tried pulling his arm out a little faster.

"Where are you going?" Matt whined without opening his eyes. Trey paused again.

"Nowhere. I just needed my arm."

"Don't" Matt complained, still without opening his eyes, and cradled back into the side of Trey. He threw his arm around Trey and pulled him back, closer to him.

"Twiddlywinks, I should probably go get us some coffee. I mean, me coffee. You apple juice."

"f*ck that." Matt moaned and kept his grip on Trey.

"But muffybuff, I'm gonna have to go put the coffee on anyway. You know, get it ready." Trey was trying to stay patient, seriously needing some coffee to make up for the lack of sleep. "You can lay here. Lay here all day if you want. I'll bring you whatever you-"

"NO!" Matt shouted and nestled further against Trey.

"But dupeykins, I need caffeine." Trey said, getting a little more frantic about getting to the kitchen for some coffee. It wasn't that he couldn't just lay there with Matt and not have any coffee. It was that Matt had been doing this for the past week. He was extremely needy and at first Trey accepted it, enjoyed it really. He loved taking care of Matt. He was good at it. He enjoyed taking care of his every need from the moment he met him. But Matt was always an able bodied functioning adult. He was never this needy and Trey was starting to let it get to him. And he felt bad because of it. He knew if he was getting this sick of it after only about a week of Matt behaving this way, it was going to be one hell of a situation the next few months.

"Fine." Matt mumbled and furrowed his brows without opening his eyes. He pulled away from Trey and turned over to face the opposite direction. Trey watched him for a moment and then got out of bed to head for the kitchen.

He came back in minutes later, just as naked as he left, and had with him bagels, strawberry cream cheese, apple juice and decaf coffee. He drank his coffee quickly in the kitchen so Matt wouldn't hassle him for a sip.

"Wake up. Breakfast." Trey announced and sat on the bed with all the food.

"I'm not eating."

"Why?"

"I want real coffee."

"Well you can't have real coffee." Trey said to the back of Matt.

"Then I don't want real food."

"Matt! Stop being a big baby about this." Trey was starting to get aggravated. He knew it was up to Matt to actually eat, but that it was still his responsibility too to make sure he actually does eat.

"I'm not being a baby. I don't want to eat."

"Eat dammit!" Trey yelled. He knew eventually Matt would sit up and eat, but he wasn't in the mood to sit there and go back and forth with him like this for the next forty-five minutes. "Eat or I swear I'm going to raise this baby a Jew."

"You wouldn't!" Matt suddenly sat up and stared over at Trey. Trey laughed. It had nothing to do with the fact their baby was going to be born Jewish. It had more to do with the fact that Matt didn't believe in supporting or promoting any type of religious traditions either way.

"Don't push me. Now," Trey put a piece of bagel up to Matt's mouth. "eat." Matt ate it. Trey leaned over and gave Matt a soft kiss before bending the straw that was in the apple juice for him.

"Needs more cream cheese." Matt complained, but then reached over and took more of the bagel off the plate. "Where's your coffee?" Matt asked suspiciously.

"I drank it."

"You drank it that fast?"

"Yes."

"You drank it that fast so that I didn't ask for any."

"Basically."

"That's mean."

"No it's not. It's smart. And kind. Want some apple juice?"

"No." Matt pouted.

"Want my dick up your a-?"

"Sometimes." Matt cut him off.

"Well- wait, sometimes? SOMETIMES?" Trey looked at Matt, a little in disbelief. Matt sat there chewing the bagel. "Do you really mean that?"

"Do you really mean I can't have even a sip of your coffee?"

"Yes."

"Ugh" Matt groaned and then pouted. Trey started picking his nose.

"Stop pouting."

"Stop picking your nose."

"Matt, we can sit here and go back and forth like this all you want, but you're still not getting any coffee."

"Why?"

"You already know why."

"Because precious Dr Emma said so?"

"Yes."

Matt pouted some more. Trey ignored it.

"No caffeine. This is already a high risk pregnancy. We discussed this. No f*ckin' caffeine."

"I really don't like you sometimes. And why are you calling me old?"

"I'm not calling you old. And you do too like me. So don't do that."

"I want caffeine." Matt suddenly grunted at Trey. He had a plea in his eye but wasn't going to back down from the disgruntled look on his face.

"No. Caffeine just constipates you anyway."

"No it doesn't."

"Coffee does. Don't say it doesn't because it does."

Matt threw his arms across his chest. Trey handed the juice to him.

"Drink some. Drink some and I'll let you have a sip of caffeine." Trey offered. Matt didn't move. But after a few moments of Trey not moving the juice away either, Matt took a sip of it before drinking most of it down.

Trey stayed true to his word and got up and brought back half a cup of real coffee for them to share.

"Now get up and get dressed. We're having company today." Trey told him, but that didn't make him move. Instead Matt sat there and watched a naked Trey walk around the room for the next twenty-five minutes.

"I thought you said I could stay in bed all day?" Matt finally said as he watched Trey put some clothes on.

"I did say that but that was before I checked the messages on my phone. Eric's coming over."

"Why would I have to get out of bed for that?"

"It's not just Eric."

"Who's coming with him?"

"I don't know. He didn't say. He just said we're coming over. Here, get dressed." Trey said and threw Matt's clothes at him that he pulled out of the dresser.


Chapter 14 soon to follow
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby Dead Til Midnight » Sun Apr 12, 2009 3:35 pm

Soooo is this is kinda like a StanxKyle fic but instead it's a MattXTrey fic.

Am I correct? :|
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby erjolog » Sun Apr 12, 2009 3:55 pm

Right! :roll:
Really nice :mrgreen: , wait for the next chapter :wink:
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby willowrose » Sun Apr 12, 2009 4:04 pm

Dead Til Midnight wrote:Soooo is this is kinda like a StanxKyle fic but instead it's a MattXTrey fic.

Am I correct? :|


Yes. I suppose you could put it that way. :wink: I think I'd write Kyle and Stan differently than I'm writing "Matt" and "Trey", but since Kyle and Stan is so popular, this would sorta be like that, but on the not popular side. Are you enjoying it so far?
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby Wii fit man » Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:02 pm

Great chapter! "eat or I'm raising this baby jewish" :lol:

I can't wait for tommorrow's chapter!
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby willowrose » Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:23 am

Wii fit man wrote:Great chapter! "eat or I'm raising this baby jewish" :lol:

I can't wait for tommorrow's chapter!


Thank you!! :wink:
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby willowrose » Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:28 am

erjolog wrote:Right! :roll:
Really nice :mrgreen: , wait for the next chapter :wink:


Thank you very much!!! Tomorrow's chapter will be posted sometime around the middle of the day. :)
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby Dead Til Midnight » Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:51 am

willowrose wrote:
Dead Til Midnight wrote:Soooo is this is kinda like a StanxKyle fic but instead it's a MattXTrey fic.

Am I correct? :|


Yes. I suppose you could put it that way. :wink: I think I'd write Kyle and Stan differently than I'm writing "Matt" and "Trey", but since Kyle and Stan is so popular, this would sorta be like that, but on the not popular side. Are you enjoying it so far?

Yes I am.
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby butters kenny » Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:30 am

Wii fit man wrote:Great chapter! "eat or I'm raising this baby jewish" :lol:



No! You monster!
I Wasn't choking you I was just hugging your neck

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( chef joined the sith so why don't you?)

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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby willowrose » Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:53 am

Dead Til Midnight wrote:
willowrose wrote:
Dead Til Midnight wrote:Soooo is this is kinda like a StanxKyle fic but instead it's a MattXTrey fic.

Am I correct? :|


Yes. I suppose you could put it that way. :wink: I think I'd write Kyle and Stan differently than I'm writing "Matt" and "Trey", but since Kyle and Stan is so popular, this would sorta be like that, but on the not popular side. Are you enjoying it so far?

Yes I am.


Good! Next chapter will be posted sometime tomorrow. ;) Good stuff yet to happen.
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby willowrose » Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:55 am

butters kenny wrote:
Wii fit man wrote:Great chapter! "eat or I'm raising this baby jewish" :lol:



No! You monster!


Well the baby will be Jewish either way, so Trey is just being a butt head.
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby BigCamera4892 » Mon Apr 13, 2009 5:47 am

Great chapter. We get to see how MnT actually live. From the stubbed toe to the banter back and forth to breakfast. I felt as if I was in the room with them. (But they didn't see me).

And Eric is bringing someone to visit. Hmmmm. . . . . .

Hope you had a great Easter, willowrose, and I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Next will be either Eric at the door, or else we may cut to Kacey and Kevin, or something else will happen *) . And when it does, I'll be reading!

* eagerly waits for Chapter 14 *

-BC
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby Wii fit man » Mon Apr 13, 2009 5:49 am

butters kenny wrote:
Wii fit man wrote:Great chapter! "eat or I'm raising this baby jewish" :lol:



No! You monster!

Wow, BK... :lol:
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Re: Who's your daddy?

Postby willowrose » Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:00 pm

BigCamera4892 wrote:

And Eric is bringing someone to visit. Hmmmm. . . . . .

Hope you had a great Easter, willowrose, and I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Next will be either Eric at the door, or else we may cut to Kacey and Kevin, or something else will happen *) . And when it does, I'll be reading!

* eagerly waits for Chapter 14 *

-BC


Thanks BC!!!! ;) Next chap coming right up!!!
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