The New Girl {by RandomPicklez}

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The New Girl {by RandomPicklez}

Postby RandomPicklez » Fri Jul 17, 2009 6:55 pm

This is my first fanfic. It's about a new girl at school whose name is Jamie, and she soon falls in love with Kyle.


Chapter 1

Mr. Garrison: Okay children, today we have a new student. Her name is Jamie Melzano. She comes from Los Angeles, CA. Jamie, say hi to the class.

Jamie: Hi everyone!

Mr. Garrison: Now Jamie, where would you like to sit?

Jamie: Next to that hot boy with the green hat! *points to Kyle*

Mr. Garrison: Oh, you mean Kyle. Okay then.

*walks over to an empty desk next to Kyle, then sits there*

Jamie: Hello. So your name is Kyle?

Kyle: Yes.

Jamie: You're cute. Would you like to sit by me at lunch today?

Kyle: Sure, I guess.


Later that day at lunch, Jamie and Kyle were getting to know each other very well, but before it was time for recess, Jamie asked him one more question.

Jamie: Kyle, you seem to be a very nice person. Would you like to hang out at Stark's Pond tonight?

Kyle: Yes!


So then that night, Kyle asked his parents.

Kyle: Mom, is it OK if I can hang out with my new girlfriend tonight at Stark's Pond?

Shiela: What what WHAT? Girlfriend?

Kyle: Yeah! Her name is Jamie and she just came here to South Park. She is really nice.

Shiela: Well as long as you don't stay too late, I'll let you. Be back before 9.

Kyle: Thanks!

So he headed to Stark's Pond to meet Jamie there.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby GlittersBlings » Fri Jul 17, 2009 6:59 pm

Aw, Kyle has a girlfriend :) . Please continued.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby RandomPicklez » Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:41 pm

GlittersBlings wrote:Aw, Kyle has a girlfriend :) . Please continued.

Continuing it...NOW!


Chapter 2

Kyle arrived at Stark's Pond and then sat next to Jamie.

Jamie: Kyle, I'd like to ask you a question.

Kyle: Sure.

Jamie: Have you ever done anything heroic?

Kyle: Many times.

Jamie: What was the most heroic act you did?

Kyle: The time when a comet hit South Park and then evil turkeys and aliens started invading, so then me and my friends fought them all and saved the day.

(BTW, the whole thing about the comet is a reference to the SP game for N64 and PS1)

Jamie: Wow, you're very brave. And cute too.

Kyle: Thanks.

*notices the bird on Jamie's shoulder*

Kyle: Hey Jamie, why is that bird on your shoulder?

Jamie: Oh, that's my pet cockatoo, Kate. I've had her for a year now. She follows me around everywhere. Kate, would you like to say hi to my boyfriend Kyle?

*the bird flies above Kyle and craps on his hat*

Kyle: Ewwwww!

Jamie: It's OK, she does that to everyone she meets.

Kyle: All right then, hi Kate...

*wipes the crap off his hat, and then decides to take his hat off*

Jamie: Don't worry, you'll make better friends with her soon.

*Jamie looks over at Kyle, seeing his hair*

Jamie: By the way, I like your hair.

Kyle: Thanks. I personally don't like it though.

Jamie: Why not?

Kyle: I don't know why.

*glances over at Jamie's watch, notices the time is 8:30*

Kyle: Holy s***! I better get going now, my parents want me back by 9! See you tomorrow, Jamie.

Jamie: Bye!
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Re: The New Girl

Postby RandomPicklez » Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:17 pm

Chapter 3

That night, when Kyle got back home, he told his parents all about Jamie.

Kyle: She has green hair, she has a pet cockatoo named Kate, her favorite video game is Metal Gear Solid 2: Sons of Liberty, and she loves to read books.

Shiela: Well she sounds like a great person.

Kyle: She is. Hopefully we can meet up again tomorrow.


The next day, at school...


Mr. Garrison: Today is pet day, so I hope you all brought your pets for us to see.

Jamie: I did!

Stan: Me too!

Mr. Garrison: Jamie, you can go first.

Jamie: This is my pet cockatoo. Her name is Kate. I've had her for a year, and I found her at a pet store in Los Angeles that sold small animals. She likes to eat blackberries and insects.

Mr. Garrison: That's nice.

*Kate flies off Jamie's shoulder*

Jamie: Kate, no!

*Kate stands on top of Cartman's head*

Cartman: God damn it, get off me!

*Kate craps on Cartman and flies over to Kyle*

Cartman: Ah, weak!

Kyle: Serves you right, fatass!

*Kate stands on top of Kyle's shoulder*

Kyle: You did fine, Kate.

Jamie: Wow, it seems you and Kate are starting to become great friends now.

Kyle: Can I hold onto her for a little while?

Jamie: Sure.


Later that day...

Mr. Garrison: Now for our next assignment, we will--

*Kyle raises his hand*

Mr. Garrison: Yes, Kyle?

Kyle: I have to pee.

Mr. Garrison: Okay, but make it quick.

*Kyle runs to the bathroom, but Kate seems to follow*

Jamie: Kate, get back here!

*Jamie chases after Kate, then Kate flies into the boys' room, and Jamie follows*

Kyle: Uh Jamie, why are you in here?

Jamie: I need to get Kate.

*Kate stands on top of one of the stalls*

Jamie: Kate, get down here.

*jumps up and tries to get Kate, and then Kyle washes his hands and as soon as he opens the door, Kate flies out and Jamie chases after her*

Jamie: Get back here!

*Kate then flies down the hallway, and Kyle returns to the classroom*

Mr. Garrison: Kyle, where is Jamie?

Kyle: Her bird is flying all over the school, and so she's chasing after it.

Mr. Garrison: Tell her that we'll get it for her, she needs to get back.

Kyle: OK.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby Morgueanna » Fri Jul 24, 2009 8:11 pm

You know what would be a good conflict is for Kyle's mom to get mad about his girlfriend not being Jewish. It would be such a Sheila thing to do! And then Cartman can rip on him for that. lol.

But I do like how you had the bird crap on Cartman! It would be funny to have it keep doing that to him. And then he could be like "Hey! Why the f*ck does it keep doing that! Bad birdy!"

So far I like the concept of Kyle getting a girlfriend though. I'm kind of tired of Stan and Wendy.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby RandomPicklez » Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:20 pm

Morgueanna wrote:You know what would be a good conflict is for Kyle's mom to get mad about his girlfriend not being Jewish. It would be such a Sheila thing to do! And then Cartman can rip on him for that. lol.

But I do like how you had the bird crap on Cartman! It would be funny to have it keep doing that to him. And then he could be like "Hey! Why the f*ck does it keep doing that! Bad birdy!"

So far I like the concept of Kyle getting a girlfriend though. I'm kind of tired of Stan and Wendy.

Yeah. Since Stan has a girlfriend, I decided Kyle should have one too. And you just gave me some great ideas.

I will start writing chapter 4 soon.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby Morgueanna » Mon Jul 27, 2009 8:04 pm

Well cool. Would you mind reading my fanfic? It's called "Twilight Terror" and it's my tribute to the Goth Kids. I would love to hear other people's thoughts on it, if they find it funny, ...etc. :gothstan:
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Re: The New Girl

Postby RandomPicklez » Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:59 pm

Chapter 4

Principal Victoria came into the class, with Jamie's bird.

Principal Victoria: Jamie Melzano?

Jamie: Yes?

Principal Victoria: I found your bird.

Jamie: Thanks.

*Victoria leaves the classroom, and then Kate flies over to Jamie and gets on her shoulder, next the bell rings*

Mr. Garrison: That's all for today, see you all on Monday.


As Kyle and Jamie were walking down the hall, Jamie asked him a question.

Jamie: Kyle, would you like to have a sleepover at my house tonight?

Kyle: Hell yeah!

Jamie: Make sure to be at my house by 6:00.

Kyle: I'll be there.


That night, Kyle asked his parents.

Kyle: Mom, Jamie invited me to her house for a sleepover. Is it OK if I can go?

Shiela: Sure.

*Kyle gets everything ready and then he heads over to Jamie's house*

Jamie: Hi Kyle! Come on in.

*Kyle walks into the house*
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Re: The New Girl

Postby IKyman » Thu Jul 30, 2009 11:55 pm

Ah, you're such an talented writer. It is always interested to read a a story about Kyle being paired up with girl other then boys :P . Please continued.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby Morgueanna » Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:16 am

Bom chicka wah wah! j/k
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Re: The New Girl

Postby RandomPicklez » Sun Aug 02, 2009 10:06 pm

IKyman wrote:Ah, you're such an talented writer. It is always interested to read a a story about Kyle being paired up with girl other then boys :P . Please continued.

Thanks. And yes, I am so sick of seeing all this StanXKyle stuff, so I decided to make a girlfriend for Kyle.

Chapter 5 is coming soon, but I won't go on forever with this fanfic. I'll end it on 7 or 8, and I'm thinking of making a short story once I get done with this one.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby RandomPicklez » Fri Aug 07, 2009 8:20 pm

And now, the moment you've all been waiting for! Here comes...

Chapter 5

Jamie: Kyle, what would you like to do first?

Kyle: Show me that game you told me about, the one you said was your favorite.

Jamie: Metal Gear Solid 2?

Kyle: Yes, that one.

Jamie: OK, but I'm not going to go through the whole game tonight, I'll just show you the beginning and then I'll let you borrow it. Just remember to be careful with the disc. By the way, do you have a PS2?

Kyle: Yes, but it's not plugged in at the moment. The only console I have plugged in at our house is the Xbox 360.

Jamie: I want a 360! All I have is a PS2, Xbox, PS1, and Gamecube.


Later, after Jamie goes through the Tanker chapter in MGS2...

Jamie: I'll turn it off right here.

Kyle: I really want to know what happens next! Tomorrow before I leave, I'm borrowing that game right away.

Jamie: So now what do you want to do?

Kyle: Let's watch some movies and have a pillow fight.

Jamie: Sounds fun to me. What movie do you want to watch?

Kyle: Asses of Fire 2!

Jamie: All right, but we'll have to watch it in my room because if we watch it in the living room, my parents will get pissed. They HATE Terrance and Phillip.

Kyle: My parents do too.

Jamie: By the way, I forgot to ask you something. What is your religion?

Kyle: Jewish. Why?

Jamie: I just wanted to know. But hey, I'm a Jew too!

Kyle: Sweet! And here's some advice: Stay away from Eric Cartman, the fat kid in our class.

Jamie: Why?

Kyle: He hates Jews. Just don't tell him you're a Jew, OK?

Jamie: OK.


The next day...

*Kyle leaves, holding MGS2*

Jamie: Bye, see you on Monday!

Kyle: Bye!

*Kyle goes over to his house and walks in*

Shiela: Kyle, how did it go?

Kyle: Just fine! Jamie and I played games, watched a movie, and had a pillow fight. I even found out that she's Jewish, just like us. And she let me borrow this.

*holds up MGS2*

Kyle: It's her favorite game and it looks really good. Can you help me hook the PS2 back up?

Shiela: Sure.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby GermanyRules56 » Fri Aug 07, 2009 8:37 pm

Is this the end? I like where this is headed. You should add in some conflict with Cartman and Kyle's new
girlfriend.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby IKyman » Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:06 pm

Cool. Jamie is Jewish, too. It's so interested that Kyle finds a girl that has the same Jewish faith. Apparently, Cartman would rip on her for being a Jew and never leave her alone.
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Re: The New Girl

Postby RandomPicklez » Sat Aug 08, 2009 7:05 pm

GermanyRules56 wrote:Is this the end? I like where this is headed. You should add in some conflict with Cartman and Kyle's new
girlfriend.

It's not over yet. There will be a few more chapters and then it will be done. I will add some conflict with Cartman and Jamie in the next chapter.
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