Script Idea - Transitional Butters 1st Draft

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Script Idea - Transitional Butters 1st Draft

Postby Tarper » Sun Jan 01, 2017 10:29 pm

An idea I wanted to post. First of a five part story arch. My daughter was the inspiration. Written with Final Draft 9.

TRANSITIONAL BUTTERS


FADE IN:


EXT. SOUTH PARK NEIGHBORHOOD, DAY

BUTTERS STOTCH walks down the sidewalk on his way to school.
He sees no one but girls leaving for school as he walks. They
all ignore him.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Hi girls. Going to be a great day.

He stops in front of a recently sold house. He watches as
cranes and construction equipment build an enormous
greenhouse in the backyard.

BUTTERS STOTCH (CONT'D)
Wow.

ALEX NAKAMURA, a Japanese American with skater clothing,
black skull cap and dark brown hair with light pink
highlights walks outside. Alex waves at Butters.

BUTTERS STOTCH (CONT'D)
Hi, names Butters. Is this your
house?

ALEX NAKAMURA
My parents and I just moved into
town. My name is Alex Nakamura.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Another Mexican family? Neato! Do
you know David and his family
(interrupted)

ALEX NAKAMURA
Japanese.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Huh?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Nakamura is Japanese. My
Grandfather is from Tokyo.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Oh, we got some of those too! How
old are you?

ALEX NAKAMURA
I'm ten.

BUTTERS STOTCH
I'll be ten in two days, you'll be
in my class! That's great! I think
your really going to like it here.

RIKU NAKAMURA walks outside, he is an elderly Japanese man
with a strict demeanor. Alex is alarmed and is very worried
about Butters being there.

RIKU NAKAMURA
Honorable grandson Alex, I have
finished unpacking and sorting your
room. I expect it to be as I left
it on my return.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Thank you grandfather.

RIKU NAKAMURA
Grandson who is this?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Grandfather, this is Butters. He'll
be in my class.

BUTTERS STOTCH
It's good to meet you both.

Riku is not impressed

RIKU NAKAMURA
(in Japanese)
Keep your senses around these
inbreeding mountain round eyes.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Well I better get going or I'll be
late for school. It was good
meeting you, I'll let the other
guys know so you don't have to make
such a big first impression.

Butters starts walking OS.

ALEX NAKAMURA
(nervous)
No, no that's OK, really.

Butters stops.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Their a real swell bunch of guys.
You'll fit right in.

Alex looks up at his grandfather who looks down at Alex.

ALEX NAKAMURA
I'm sure I will.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Well all right then. I'll see you
in class. (to himself) Finally
another boy in the neighborhood.

Butter's walks OS, leaving Alex mortified.



INT. SOUTH PARK ELEMENTARY 4TH GRADE CLASS

KYLE BROFLOVSKI, STAN MARSH, ERIC CARTMAN AND KENNY McCORMICK
sit at their desk.

KYLE BROFLOVSKI
It's a greenhouse. My dad said it's
the biggest one in the county.

CRAIG TUCKER
They've been working on it for
three days now.

KYLE BROFLOVSKI
Dude you could hear the
construction all the way from my
house.

STAN MARSH
Yeah I barely slept.

ERIC CARTMAN
Totally interrupted my 2:00am sh*t.

BUTTERS STOTCH
When Alex gets here we should ask
him to see inside.

STAN MARSH
That actually sounds pretty sweet.

KYLE BROFLOVSKI
I'm in.

ERIC CARTMAN
A fruity greenhouse tour, how
exciting.

Mrs. Nelson walks into the class room with ALEX NAKAMURA
right behind her.
Alex is wearing a punk rock style shirt, skirt, skull cap
with pink and black converse shoes and her pink highlighted
hair in pigtails.

MRS. NELSON
All right, before we begin class I
want to introduce a new student of
ours. Please welcome from Michigan,
Alex Nakamura. Please tell the
class a little about yourself,
Alex.

The four boys look toward Butters who's shocked.

STAN MARSH
Butter's I'm confused. You've said,
"he" and "him" like a hundred times
since yesterday.

BUTTERS STOTCH
She was a he I swear.

MRS. NELSON
Stan, Butters, quiet please.

ALEX NAKAMURA
My family and I moved here from
Mackinaw City. My dad is opening an
outdoor shop and my mom is running
an Asian-American organic bar/cafe
inside the store. My father is
Japanese and my mom, isn't.

MRS. NELSON
Well we welcome you to our school
Alex. You can take the empty desk
next to Butters.

Nervous, Alex sits next to Butters who is clearly distraught.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Alex, what are you doing?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Getting ready for class.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Why are you dressed like a girl?


ALEX NAKAMURA
Because I am a girl.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Yesterday your grandpa called you
grandson, twice! So what's the
deal?!

JIMMY VALMER whispers to Butters.

BUTTERS STOTCH (CONT'D)
Huh? She's a dixie chick?

JIMMY VALMER
No you retard. She's transgender.

BUTTERS STOTCH
(yelling)
She's a chick with a dick?!

The entire class is quickly quiet.

ALEX NAKAMURA
What in the hell is wrong with you?

Alex leaves the classroom with tears in her eyes.

MRS. NELSON
Butters report to PC Principals
office immediately!



INT. PC PRINCIPALS OFFICE

Butters sits across from PC PRINCIPAL'S desk. PC Principal is
irate.

PC PRINCIPAL
You have got to be f*cking kidding
me! You of all people should have
some compassion toward the LGBT.
I've read your report Stotch and it
says you're a proud bi-curious male
individual who considers Caitlyn
Jenner a hero. But all I see is a
transphobic lying pig! And that
really pisses me off! I thought you
kids have learned social tolerance!

PC Principal flips his desk over making Butters panic.

PC PRINCIPAL (CONT'D)
54% of all transkids commit suicide
because of ignorant bigots such as
yourself!
Enjoy the thought of killing kids
who just want to be on the outside
what they feel on the inside bro?!

BUTTERS STOTCH
No sir.

PC PRINCIPAL
There's a beautiful little girl out
there hurting because of you bro
and you're going to fix it bro!

BUTTERS STOTCH
How am I suppose to do that?

PC PRINCIPAL
I think the three of us can come up
with something.

BUTTERS STOTCH
The three of us?

PC PRINCIPAL
(to intercom)
Send in Mr. Stotch.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Oh no.

Butters father STEPHEN STOTCH walks into the office.

STEPHEN STOTCH
Butters your principal called me
saying you've commented a hate
crime?! Well you are grounded for a
month Mr!

PC PRINCIPAL
I feel anything involving a child's
life is well beyond grounding Mr.
Stotch.

STEPHEN STOTCH
What's beyond grounding?

PC PRINCIPAL
Butters unchecked privilege and
closed-mindedness of transkids
needs to be dealt immediately.
The problem is your son has no idea
what transkids go through on a day
by day bases, so in order to
subside his disgusting,
chauvinistic thoughts I'm proposing
this. Butters lives as a true
transkid in and out of school for a
week. He'll go under a different
name and pronouns, wear the
clothing of and follow all the
conducts of the opposite sex. If he
accomplishes this in a weeks time
Butters will address the entire
school about the bravery of these
children and the need of support
for transkids everywhere.

BUTTERS STOTCH
The entire school?

PC PRINCIPAL
That right.

BUTTERS STOTCH
But I've already had to pretend to
be Margarine to infiltrate the
girls.

PC PRINCIPAL
You think these kids are
pretending?! Well you're in for a
real eye opener Stotch! (to Stephen
Stotch) He either does this or
finds himself another school! Your
choice bro.

STEPHEN STOTCH
No son of mine is going to be an
intolerant bastard. He'll do it.

PC PRINCIPAL
Good to hear. I'll get the memo's
sent out immediately. I expect to
see Margarine front and center in
the AM.



INT. STOTCH RESIDENCE, MORNING

Butters room is dark, the only thing seen past Butters
himself is the black silhouettes of Stephen and Linda in the
background. Stephen turns on the light switch revealing
Butters room has been vastly decorated in little girl
accessories that are not age appropriate for Butters.

LINDA STOTCH
Rise and shine, Margarine.

BUTTERS STOTCH
My room? How did you? When did you?

STEPHEN STOTCH
Melatonin. Looks great doesn't it?
Now get up, it's time to get ready
for your first day of school.

LINDA STOTCH
I've already laid out your clothes
honey and threw all those old
clothes of yours away. Now hurry up
so mommy can do your hair.

Stephen and Linda leave. Butters looks at the end of his bed
to see a very ugly dress that looks like it was designed with
a kindergartner in mind. A light flashes from the outside a
the sound of a fire being lit is heard. Butters peers outside
and sees Stephen and Linda burning all of Butters boy stuff.
His Professor Chaos costume stands out as it burns away.



INT. STOTCH RESIDENCE, BATHROOM

Linda puts make up on Butters and puts a barrette in his
hair.



INT. STOTCH RESIDENCE, KITCHEN

Butters sits at the table, Stephen pours him a bowl of stupid
spoiled whore puffs.

STEPHEN STOTCH
Hurry up and eat your breakfast,
dear. And don't forget I'm putting
your birthday invitations in your
bag. I expect all of them to be
handed out or you're grounded miss.

Stephen puts a handful of pink invitations in Butters bag.

BUTTERS STOTCH
But my birthday's tomorrow. I've
already handed out my invitations.

LINDA STOTCH
Now Margarine these all clearly
have your name on them. So do as
your father says.
I'll be making phone calls later to
make sure you did.

STEPHEN STOTCH
Look at the time. Better get on
your way for your first day of
school Margarine or you'll be
late... and grounded.



EXT. SOUTH PARK ELEMENTARY HALLWAY

Butters walks until he sees Alex at her locker. Kids walking
by have bizarre faces when they notice Butters getup.

ALEX NAKAMURA
(agitated)
Nice dress, dude.

BUTTERS STOTCH
My parents picked it out.

ALEX NAKAMURA
I hope so.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Alex, I just wanted to say I'm
sorry. I just got confused. I mean
your the first transkid I've met.

ALEX NAKAMURA
So you decided to out me and
embarrass me in front of the entire
class and your sorry about it?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Yes, and in order to show my
sincerity I'm inviting you to my
birthday party tomorrow.

Butters reaches into his bag and hands Alex an invitation.

ALEX NAKAMURA
I'm not going to your damn party!
My family and I moved here to get
away from people like you!

Alex slams her locker shut and storms away.

BUTTERS STOTCH
People like me?

Butters walks OS. Eric, Kyle, Stan and Kenny walk onto the
scene.

KYLE BROFLOVSKI
What the hell?

STAN MARSH
So Butters is a girl now?

ERIC CARTMAN
When wasn't he?



INT. SOUTH PARK ELEMENTARY 4TH GRADE CLASS

PC Principal stands next to Mrs. Nelson. Butters sits at his
desk.

MRS. NELSON
Class up front please. PC Principal
has an announcement.

PC PRINCIPAL
Yesterday was a day I'll never
forget. As a whole I'm proud of you
all as a class. But one individual
attempted to destroy all that we
hold PC. Well that individual has
been dealt with and is no longer a
threat.

PC Principal hands Alex a school sports pamphlet.

PC PRINCIPAL (CONT'D)
Class your new student Alex
Nakamura played soccer for her old
school and helped take them to the
state championship game. Alex I
extend an invitation and would like
if you considered joining our girls
soccer team. Speak with Coach
Garrett after school if you're
interested.

ALEX NAKAMURA
I would love too.

PC PRINCIPAL
Loving the enthusiasm young lady.
Look forward to watching you kick
ass in the name of our school.
(addressing class)
But we have another new student to
introduce as well. I'm told some of
you may already know her but please
welcome back, Margarine.
Margarine stand up and tell us a
little about yourself.

Butters stands up and walks to the front of the class. He
stares at his classmates who quietly stare back.

BUTTERS STOTCH
My name is Margarine, I'm nine
years old but my birthday's
tomorrow. And... I love hamsters.

PC PRINCIPAL
I think we all can relate to that.
Welcome to South Park elementary.

All the students are bewildered but welcome Margarine with
hand claps as Butters takes his seat. Alex doesn't clap but
stares at Butters as he sits down humiliated.



EXT. SOUTH PARK ELEMENTARY PLAYGROUND

The 4th grade boys all huddle in a circle.

ERIC CARTMAN
My fellows bra's, PC Principal has
now displayed a power we never knew
existed. He's killed Butters and
replaced him with Margarine.

STAN MARSH
Two transkids in two days. Anyone
one of us could be next.

CLYDE DONOVAN
So what do we do?

ERIC CARTMAN
Craig you're gay, you've got to
have some insight on this.

CRAIG TUCKER
Just because I'm gay doesn't mean I
want to be a chick dude.

KENNY
sh*t.

CLYDE DONOVAN
There's only one thing we can do.
We must avoid the transkids at all
cost.

STAN MARSH
Wouldn't that be bigotry? If we
single out Butters we could
inadvertently make us a target to
become transkids ourselves.

CRAIG TUCKER
Except Butters has always been an
outcast so really nothing changes.

KYLE BROFLOVSKI
True.

JIMMY VALMER
It was his own privilege that
destroyed him.

ERIC CARTMAN
I think we're all in agreement
then. Butters is dead, died
terribly in a car wreck. He's very
missed. All agree?

ALL BOYS
Agree.

Butters walks onto the scene he is ashamed at his appearance.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Hey guys I have some new
invitations you'll need to get into
my party tomorrow.

Butters passes out his pink invitations. The boys examine
them and remain quiet.

ERIC CARTMAN
Margarine, why would a bunch of
guys go to a girls birthday party?

BUTTERS STOTCH
It's still me, Butters, I'm one of
you.

CLYDE DONOVAN
Butters is dead.

STAN MARSH
He'll be missed.

The boys drop Butters invitations and walk away.

KYLE BROFLOVSKI
Not really.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Come on fellas! Don't do this!
Please?

The boys leave Butters alone and crying, his invitations
blowing away as a rain storm comes in. Alex is walking in the
distance when one of the invitations hit her. She picks it up
and sees Butters crying by himself as it begins to rain.



INT. STOTCH RESIDENCE, LIVING ROOM

Butters sits in his living room, his dress and make-up ruined
from the weather. There is nothing that would indicate it was
Butters birthday. Stephen and Linda walk into the room.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Hey mom, hey day, what happened to
the cake and decorations?

LINDA STOTCH
Someone made a big mistake and
ordered all boy party supplies so
we had to take them all back.

STEPHEN STOTCH
Doesn't look like anyone is coming
anyway so your mom and I are going
out to eat. Theirs some Ravioli in
the fridge if you need Margarine.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Your going out to eat?

LINDA STOTCH
Just to Applebees. Oops almost
forgot, here's your birthday cards
from Aunt Nellie and your Uncle
Budd.

Linda hands Butters the two cards and leaves.

STEPHEN STOTCH
And just so you don't think we
forgot. Here's a birthday card for
our little girl.

Stephen hands Butters a card and leaves the house. Butters
opens the cards from his Aunt and Uncle, two fifty dollar
bills fall out. He opens the card from his mom and dad and
gets excited about a one hundred dollar bill inside.

BUTTERS STOTCH
(reading card)
To our little girl, Margarine, here
is your interest back from your
yearly allowance. Love, Mom and
Dad.

Butters is depressed again after reading the card. Butters
turns on the TV when their is a knock at the door. Butters
answers it. Alex is at the door holding the invitation she
picked up from the playground.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Hey.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Hi, want to come in?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Are you sure your other guests
won't mind?

BUTTERS STOTCH
I'm pretty sure they won't care.

Alex walks inside and feels saddened for Butters that the
house is empty.

ALEX NAKAMURA
None of your friends showed up?

BUTTERS STOTCH
What friends? Now that I'm
Margarine none of the guys want
anything to do with me.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Didn't you invite any of the girls?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Wouldn't do me any good. They just
see me as Butters.

ALEX NAKAMURA
I know how you feel.

It hits Butters that Alex has gone through the same thing.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Was it like this for you?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Yes, especially at first.

BUTTERS STOTCH
How did you change it?

ALEX NAKAMURA
I had to move here, remember?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Until I ruined it for you?

Alex sees and relates to the hopelessness Butters is feeling.

ALEX NAKAMURA
The problem with the girls is your
image.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Well geez, I haven't had much
experience with this. I'm trying my
best.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Come on, I'll get you started.

BUTTERS STOTCH
On what?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Being a girl.

BUTTERS STOTCH
You'd help me?

ALEX NAKAMURA
I can't on good conscious let you
look like, that.



INT. SOUTH PARK MALL, JUSTICE STORE

Alex leads Margarine into the girls fashion store.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Wow, I've never been in here
before.

ALEX NAKAMURA
The first step of a true transition
is the clothes.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Transition?

ALEX NAKAMURA
From a boy to a girl.

A montage shows Alex helping Butters pick out fashionable
outfits including, new pants, skirts, shirts, underwear,
pushup bras and shoes.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Do I really need a bra?

ALEX NAKAMURA
All girls wear bras Margarine. It's
still missing something though?

Alex looks around and picks a pair of stylish glasses from a
rack and puts them on Butters.

ALEX NAKAMURA (CONT'D)
Perfect.

BUTTERS STOTCH
But I don't need glasses.

ALEX NAKAMURA
They're for fashion, it gives you
that hot nerd look.

BUTTERS STOTCH
I don't know. I'm not feeling so
hot right now.

ALEX NAKAMURA
You will after our next stop.



EXT. SOUTH PARK MALL, HAIR SALON

ALEX NAKAMURA
The next step for a true transition
is hair.

BUTTERS STOTCH
I don't have much to work with.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Nothing a perfect set of hair
extensions won't fix.



INT. SOUTH PARK MALL, HAIR SALON

The hair dresser shows Butters different extensions and
styles. Butters picks a blonde set and the stylist gets to
work.



EXT. SOUTH PARK MALL, DAY

Butters whole new look is revealed as the two of them hold
bags of clothes. Butters blonde hair extensions give him a
stylish mid-length hair cut.

BUTTERS STOTCH
What now?

ALEX NAKAMURA
The final stage of your transition.
A public confidence booster.



INT. RAISINS

Butters is very nervous when the two of them walk inside and
sit at the bar counter.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Alex, I don't know about this. I
used to kind of date a girl that
works here.

ALEX NAKAMURA
No, Butters dated a girl who works
here, not Margarine. You just need
to work on your voice, soften it up
a little.

BUTTERS STOTCH
(Not much of a change)
Like this?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Perfect.

The raisins bartender stands across from them in her skimpy
uniform.

JILLIAN
Hey girls! Can I get you a couple
of drinks and menus?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Yes please.

ALEX NAKAMURA\
(to Jillian)
Just menus for now.

Jillian hands them menus.

JILLIAN
Just let me know when your ready.

BUTTERS STOTCH
(to Alex)
But I'm thirsty.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Your a girl now Margarine. You
don't buy your own drinks.

BUTTERS STOTCH
I don't?

ALEX NAKAMURA
No. Look, here comes a guy now.
Just play it cool.

Alex gets up and walks a short distance away and watches.
Clyde Donovan unknowingly walks up to Butters and flirts
hard.

CLYDE DONOVAN
Hey, good looking.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Um, hello.

ALEX NAKAMURA
(whispering from
background)
Confidence, guys like a girl with a
little sass.

BUTTERS STOTCH
I mean, hey... cutie?

CLYDE DONOVAN
You must be new. Mind if I buy you
a drink?

BUTTERS STOTCH
I'd love one.

CLYDE DONOVAN
(to Jillian)
A root beer for the lady.

JILLIAN
You got it sweetie!

CLYDE DONOVAN
(to butters)
So what's your name?

Butters begins to say Margarine but Alex signals not to.

ALEX NAKAMURA
(whispering from
background)
Make something up!

BUTTERS STOTCH
Lindsey. My names Lindsey.

CLYDE DONOVAN
Well Lindsey, my friends and I come
here often. I hope to see you
around more. Enjoy the drink baby.

CLYDE DONOVAN walks away.

CLYDE DONOVAN (CONT'D)
(yelling OS)
Hell yeah! She's a keeper!

Butters is flattered. Alex walks back and sits next to him.

ALEX NAKAMURA
How do you feel now?

BUTTERS STOTCH
As weird as that was I'm feeling...
Pretty damn hot!


Lexus, the head Raisins girl has been watching Alex and
Butters and walks up to the two of them.

LEXUS
Hi I'm Lexus and can I just say
wow! You two got it going on!

ALEX NAKAMURA
Thanks.

LEXUS
Love your looks girls. The
punk/skater babe and the sexy nerdy
girl are so in right now!

BUTTERS STOTCH
You don't remember me?

LEXUS
No, sorry sweetie haven't seen you
before.

BUTTERS STOTCH
I must be mistaken.

LEXUS
Not a problem. We here at Raisins
are always looking for girls with
your talents. How would you both
like to make a little extra cash?

BUTTERS STOTCH
How would we do that?

LEXUS
You just join our little family
here at Raisins and the money
flows!

BUTTERS STOTCH
Do you really think I could?

LEXUS
Hell yes! You got the look that
keeps guys coming back and guys
leave tips and tips equal money.
Come in tomorrow if either of you
are interested OK?

BUTTERS STOTCH
(trying to mimic)
Sounds amazing.

Lexus walks away. Butters is shocked and excited.

BUTTERS STOTCH (CONT'D)
That was her!

ALEX NAKAMURA
Lexus?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Yes!

ALEX NAKAMURA
So what? You're bi-curious
remember.

The two of them get a chuckle out of the situation. A random
boy walks up to Alex.

RAISINS PATRON
Hey baby you must be new. Mind if I
buy you a drink?



EXT. NAKAMURA RESIDENCE, DUSK

The two of them carry Butters new clothes and stop at Alex's
door.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Geez Alex, I sure did have a great
time. Can't wait to do it again.
Did you have fun?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Surprisingly, yes, I had a really
good time hanging out with you
Lindsey.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Well have a good night. And thanks
again.

ALEX NAKAMURA
You could come in and we could play
playstation or spend the night or
something?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Really?

ALEX NAKAMURA
It's still your birthday, it'll be
fun.

BUTTERS STOTCH
That would be swell! I'll text my
dad!



INT. STOTCH RESIDENCE, NIGHT

Stephen and Linda are in the kitchen. Stephen gets a text.

STEPHEN STOTCH
It's Margarine. She'd like to know
if she can spend the night at her
new friend Alex's house?

LINDA STOTCH
Isn't Alex the little transkid girl
that Margarine outed?

STEPHEN STOTCH
I believe so.

LINDA STOTCH
Isn't that a little odd?

STEPHEN STOTCH
It lets us get the night to
ourselves. Maybe make the son we
never had?

LINDA STOTCH
Oh Stephen. I'll get the leathers
out.



INT. NAKAMURA RESIDENCE

The Nakamura house is filled with exotic architecture and
furniture from Japan. Alex's dad TAKASHI NAKAMURA, a middle
aged Japanese/American man in nice athletic apparel and her
mom MAE NAKAMURA, a middle aged brunette American woman
wearing a modern casual outfit sit on the couch watching TV.

TAKASHI NAKAMURA
There's my girl! Didn't know your
friend was coming over. Lindsey
right?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Yes sir.

TAKASHI NAKAMURA
We're easy going here, call me
Takashi.

MAE NAKAMURA
Did you girls have a good time?

ALEX NAKAMURA
We hit up Raisins for some food and
did a little shopping for Lindsey's
birthday. Mind if we play the
playstation in the greenhouse?

MAE NAKAMURA
Of course. And Alex texted us that
it's your birthday Lindsey so I
hope you had a great day.

TAKASHI NAKAMURA
Yes, Happy Birthday Lindsey. Stop
by the shop for a free gift card
when you can.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Thank you both.

TAKASHI NAKAMURA
Anything for a friend of Alex's.

Butters gets a text.

BUTTERS STOTCH
My dad says it's OK if I stay the
night if it's all right with your
parents.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Mom, dad, can Lindsey spend the
night?

MAE NAKAMURA
As long as it's fine with her
parents it's fine with us.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Thanks mom, thanks dad. (To
Butters) Come on, the Greenhouse is
through the back sliders.



INT. NAKAMURA GREENHOUSE

The greenhouse is an amazing example of an indoor garden. It
is filled from top to bottom with exotic plants and
vegetables from all of Asia. The ground is paved with
Japanese sand and stone. A beautiful waterfall flows to a
creek that goes into a hot tub near a lounge and recreation
area equipped with a huge entertainment system.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Neato... is all of this real?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Yeah. My mom and dad know every
plant in here. Can't use the hot
tub though unless we ask.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Guess I better get myself a bathing
suit.

ALEX NAKAMURA
You can always borrow one of mine.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Then what are we waiting for?!

ALEX NAKAMURA
(giggling)
Lets go get our suits.

Butters and Alex are in the hot tub playing playstation and
drinking mountain dew.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Thank you Alex. For everything. You
actually made this the greatest
birthday I've had since, well ever.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Your friends never did anything for
you?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Mostly just hang me by my underwear
give me Indian rubs and stuff.
They're kind of assh*les really.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Why be friends with such f*ck
tards?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Your not the first one to say that.
I don't know, they're all I've
known. It's always been the guys
and me. Now they say I'm dead to
them. I can't help but think I've
actually been dead to them for a
long time now.

Butters becomes depressed again.

ALEX NAKAMURA
You and I are a lot alike. When I
first told my parents that I was a
girl it was a relief. It felt good
to finally be free after years of
hiding. It felt right to wear the
clothes I wanted and let my hair
grow out. I could finally be...
Alex. My mom and dad didn't tell
anyone, it was me who wanted others
to know. I thought I could inspire
people.

BUTTERS STOTCH
What happened?

ALEX NAKAMURA
My friends and the teacher's
started bullying me. I tried to
tough it out as long as I could.
Then one day two boys and two girls
jumped me in the bathroom. They
beat me up so bad I woke up in the
hospital.
My grandfather had flown all the
way from Tokyo as soon as he heard
I as hurt. He asked me what
happened. I couldn't tell him the
truth. After what happened I was
afraid.

Alex begins to cry.

ALEX NAKAMURA (CONT'D)
I lied to him. Said they attacked
me because I was different. He held
me close and said his grandson
honored him and always will.

BUTTERS STOTCH
He sure sounds like a swell fella
who loves you. I bet he'd
understand.

ALEX NAKAMURA
I wanted to tell him the truth
before we left for Colorado. That's
when I found out he'd been
diagnosed with heart disease. I
feel like if I told him, I'd lose
him in every way I can.

Remorseful, Butters puts an arm around Alex and
affectionately rubs her back.

BUTTERS STOTCH
They had no right to hurt you like
they did... And neither did I. I'm
sorry.

Alex rubs the tears out of her eyes and smiles.

ALEX NAKAMURA
Apology excepted.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Friends?

ALEX NAKAMURA
Friends.

PREDATOR ALIEN VOICE
(from distant background)
Friends.



INT. SOUTH PARK ELEMENTARY PC PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE, MORNING

PC Principal hears a knock at his door.

PC PRINCIPAL
Come in.

Butters walks in.

PC PRINCIPAL (CONT'D)
Margarine, come in and have a seat.

Margarine sits.

PC PRINCIPAL (CONT'D)
Good to see you're adjusting
Stotch. How can I be of assistance?

BUTTERS STOTCH
Sir, I need a few things changed.

PC PRINCIPAL
Like what?

BUTTERS STOTCH
First, I want to say that you were
right. Alex is an amazing girl and
I was wrong to do what I did.

PC PRINCIPAL
I'm very glad to hear that. Do
understand though you will still
need to continue out your
punishment.

BUTTERS STOTCH
That's one of the things I want
changed.

PC PRINCIPAL
No, one day isn't going to cut it.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Just hear me out. I no longer would
like it to be called a punishment.
It's an experience. Also, I would
like to be transferred to one of
the other fourth grade classes so I
can focus on my experience.

PC PRINCIPAL
Bringing a tear to my eye Stotch.
Those are very respectful requests
that I will honor. Anything else?

BUTTERS STOTCH
One more thing. I don't want my
name to be Margarine or Butters
Stotch. Alex showed me that I
should be who makes me happy.
Butters was never happy.

PC PRINCIPAL
If that's how you truly feel I have
no problem with that. Under my roof
everyone has the right to be/and
express who they are.

BUTTERS STOTCH
Then for the record, my name is
Lindsey Carter. Butters Leopold
Stotch has died.

CUT TO:



END CREDITS
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Re: Script Idea - Transitional Butters 1st Draft

Postby Randy Marsh 2016 » Mon Jan 02, 2017 3:07 am

This is really good so far
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Re: Script Idea - Transitional Butters 1st Draft

Postby Tarper » Mon Jan 02, 2017 4:05 am

I have three more continuations of my first script Transitional Butters. These are just the story beats. They go in order:

1)Transitional Butters

2)Make it Rain'sins

3)PC Love

4)Climbing the Summit

I'm not done with the arch, two more complete scripts should cover it.


Make it Rain’sins – Story Beats

1. South Park Elementary listens to the morning announcements. Butters/Margarine Stotch has died. Both killed in a terrible car crash while on a date. Some of the students are saddened but for the most part nobody really cares.
2. The scene stops after the morning announcements are wrapping up on Lindsey Carter, “Butters,” who’s sitting in the alternative 4th grade class. She’s welcomed as the school’s newest student.
3. Alex and Lindsey show up for their first day of work at Raisins. Lexus shows them the ropes of the job. Alex doesn’t take it very seriously, but Lindsey gets way into character and is a natural flirt.
4. Clyde Donovan comes into Raisins and sees Lindsey working. Clyde hits on Lindsey and sits in her section so he can check her out.
5. In the school cafeteria Lindsey sits with Alex. Wendy and some of the other girls join them. The girls welcome Lindsey to the school and affectionately except Alex as one of the girls because of Lindsey’s PC.
6. Clyde talks to the guys as he watches Lindsey from their table. Clyde is enthralled with her.
7. The girls point out to Lindsey that Clyde has a huge crush on her. Lindsey likes this as she secretly schemes.
8. Kyle, Stan, Cartman and Kenny come into Raisins and sit. Lindsey switches tables with Porsche so she can wait on the four boys. The four don’t recognize Lindsey and think she’s fun. Lindsey makes sure Clyde sees this.
9. Clyde begins to resent the four boys as he becomes jealous.
10. Alex decides it’s best to work behind the bar with Jillian, who’s actually not as dumb as she seems.
11. Lindsey is getting a lot of attention from the boys. She flirts especially hard with Kyle. All but Kenny leave Lindsey a nice tip with Kyle leaving the most.
12. Clyde sees how much Kyle left and purposely gives Lindsey more money then him. Just as Clyde thinks he’s sealed the deal with Lindsey, Kyle comes back and asks if Lindsey would like to hangout at school tomorrow. Lindsey flirtatiously agrees while at the same time giving Kyle the run around. Clyde becomes pissed at Kyle and gets escorted out by the bouncers.
13. Lexus praises Lindsey for her amazing first days of work. Jillian is quickly beginning to annoy the hell out of Alex as Alex begins to realize that Jillian might not be dumb but she’s even more aggravating because she’s a two faced gossipy bitch.
14. Clyde confronts Kyle in the school hallway and sets a claim to Lindsey. The two argue back and forth until Lindsey stops it.
15. On the playground Clyde wants to talk to Lindsey in private. Clyde tells her that he thinks she’s hot and would love to hangout with her more. Lindsey assures Clyde that he is more then just a typical customer and kisses him. Lindsey tells Clyde to keep it quiet so she doesn’t get in trouble at work and he agrees before she runs off.
16. Kyle is getting ready to get on the school bus when he sees Lindsey walking home with Alex. Kyle tells the guys he’ll see them later and decides to walk with the girls.
17. Alex jokes about how the boys are fighting over Lindsey when Kyle starts walking with them. Kyle asks if he can talk to Lindsey for a sec.
18. A school bus drives by and Clyde sees Kyle talking to Lindsey which makes him furious.
19. Kyle expresses his feeling for Lindsey. He finds her fascinating. It’s like she’s one of the guys, as if he’s known her all along. Kyle tells Lindsey that he thinks she’s more then just a really good looking girl; he thinks she’s smart and sweet too and would like to get to know her on a personal level. Lindsey plays her cards and tells Kyle that she’s felt the same way since he walked into Raisins. Kyle becomes overly excited and Lindsey feeds into it giving Kyle his first actual kiss. Alex is just as shocked as Kyle. Kyle says it was amazing. Lindsey tells Kyle they must keep their romance quiet for now so she doesn’t get into trouble at work. Kyle agrees.
20. The three of them get to Alex’s house, Lindsey tells Kyle she’s living with Alex for awhile. Kyle would love to come inside but the girls say then need to get ready for work and say goodbye. Kyle says he’ll see Lindsey there and joyfully runs home.
21. Lindsey and Alex chill before leaving for work in Alex’s room. Alex asks Lindsey why she kissed Kyle and is concerned that Lindsey is moving too fast. Lindsey tells her that it’s all a farce; Lindsey is taking revenge against those who killed Butters and demoralize transkids. Alex is concerned for her friend.
22. Raisin’s is super busy and Lindsey and Alex are making a killing in tips.
23. Clyde walks in with a few friends and looks for Lindsey. He sees her waiting on a table. He also sees Kyle who’s looking at Lindsey while talking with Stan, Cartman and Kenny.
24. Clyde takes a seat and continues to watch.
25. Lindsey brings the four main boys some more drinks and Cartman another order of wings. Kyle puts his arm around Lindsey’s waist. Lindsey very gently removes his hand.
26. Clyde sees this and becomes enraged. He charges Kyle and begins fighting him. The bouncers jump Clyde and beat the ever loving sh*t out of him before tossing him out of Raisins and banning him.
27. Clyde coughs up blood before pissing his pants and sh*tting himself as he lays face down in a snow bank. Most of Raisins including all of our main characters watch this from the background.
28. The day is over and Alex and Lindsey get ready for bed. Alex can’t believe what happened and the two girl’s gossip.
29. Alex goes to the bathroom. Lindsey takes out a piece of paper with a list of names on it. The list reads in order, Clyde, Kyle, Stan, Cartman, Jimmy. Lindsey smiles as she crosses out Clyde’s name. The scene focuses on Kyle’s name being next.
30. End credits.
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Re: Script Idea - Transitional Butters 1st Draft

Postby Tarper » Mon Jan 02, 2017 4:06 am

PC Love – Story Beats

Summery-Lindsey continues her list of revenge taking her new relationship with Kyle further then she expected as the two grow strong feelings toward each other. Alex decides to change it up at Raisins with a new attitude and inviting new customers after she learns the Goth Kids favorite hangout has closed. Stephen and Linda Stotch learn that Lindsey wants to remain a girl permanently. The Stotch’s can’t handle the thought of losing their son to something so PC that they can’t control it and attempt to force and bribe Lindsey back into Butters. Lindsey with PC Principal’s help is put into the custody of the Nakamura’s till the Stotch’s can prove to be supportive and tolerant.


1. The Goth kids go to their favorite coffee shop to discover it’s been burned down. The building is still smoldering and a coming soon Panara bread sign is next to the ashes.
2. On the playground the Goth kids bitch about the loss of their coffee and hangout spot. Alex overhears this and invites them to Raisins. At first the Goth kids will have none of it but then realize it’s the ultimate way for them to stick it to the conformists.
3. Lindsey and Kyle hangout together around their friends on the playground. Clyde is extremely bruised all to hell and is sitting by himself in the background. The other boys are openly jealous of Kyle but Kyle tells them that he’s ready to take it to the next level. His friends warn him that it seems kind of early, but Kyle knows Lindsey is the one he wants to be his girlfriend. Kyle asks the guys when, where and how he should propose to her.
4. The girls all gossip about how cute Lindsey and Kyle are together. Wendy thinks Kyle’s going to propose that Lindsey becomes his girlfriend. Lindsey acts bashful of the thought.
5. PC Principal watches the kids. He calls Stephen Stotch on his phone and congratulates him on his daughter’s successful transition. Stephen is confused; he thought this was only a week long punishment so Butters would understand the hardships that transkids go through. PC Principal informs Stephen that Lindsey has indeed found her true calling and decided that this is who she really wants to be and if nurtured will grow into an exceptional young woman Stephen can be proud of. Stephen is against this and doesn’t want to lose his son. PC Principal thought Stephen was on the level and threatens to bash his f*cking face in if he sabotages his daughter’s happiness because he’s too afraid to except the truth that Lindsey was forced to live a tortuous life of self-deceit.
6. After PC Principal ends the call. Stephen Stotch panics and calls his wife Linda to inform her of the problem. At first it was different and fun for them but now with the thought of raising a transkid becoming a reality they both freak out and decide to call in an emergency PTA Meeting.
7. At the PTA meeting Linda and Stephen tell a story where PC Principal tricked them into letting their son pretend to be a girl so that the school seems more PC then it truly is. They demand that PC Principal is removed from his position or they will pull their son out of school and sue the system. PC Principal verbally attacks the Stotch’s about calling their daughter, son. He preaches about how the town has changed for the greater good giving light and hope to its people and how Stephen and Linda remain a dark stain. The Stotch’s argue they are not bigots but if truly given the chance their son would not want this. Lindsey walks onto the stage and confronts her parents in front of the entire PTA. She asks her parents to except her for who she is. Lindsey tells them she was trapped and never happy as their son and she loves and misses them but only if they can love her as their daughter. Many of the townspeople cry. Stephen and Linda won’t accept Lindsey as a person. The townsfolk turn on them. The Stotch’s decide to take the matter to court so they will get their son back.
8. The Stotch’s loose the case. Lindsey is put into the Nakamura’s care until Stephen and Linda have showed a drastic change in tolerance. The judge also orders that both Stephen and Linda are sterilized so that they can truly appreciate the importance of their daughter and her well-being.
9. The Goth Kids walk into Raisins and f*ck with the entire staff. They see Alex behind the bar and sit near her. The Goth kids don’t feel there is anyplace in Raisins that represents their inner dark struggles. Alex dims the lights above them and they are instantly more comfortable. Lindsey has a short shift and lets Alex know she’s going on a date with Kyle. Alex thinks it’s mean that Lindsey is taking this relationship so far just to destroy him. Lindsey doesn’t agree she wants him truly humiliated.
10. Kyle and Lindsey go to an Art festival and peer at the different paintings and drawings. Lindsey discovers Kyle shares much of the same taste in art as her because being Jewish he’s been persecuted against himself, and has a great deal of internal pain that Lindsey didn’t know existed.
11. Stephen and Linda are at the art festival and both visibly sore after being sterilized. Lindsey separates from Kyle to use the bathroom. The Stotch’s see Lindsey and begin to talk to her. Stephen try’s to tell her that if she just comes back as their son all will be forgiven and she’ll only be grounded for a little while. Linda states that Lindsey won’t be able to do boy scouts anymore; she won’t be able to go to church or anything they loved to do as a family. Lindsey won’t have it and demands they apologize. Lindsey says their son Butters is dead and they need to move on and stop trying to force her into being him. The crowds of people around them take notice of the conversation. Lindsey leaves, leaving the two embarrassed.
12. Lindsey returns to Kyle and they enjoy the rest of the festival, trying different food and music. An Asian girl from school draws an incredible picture of the two lovingly caressing. Kyle tells Lindsey that she’s everything he could ever ask for; she’s smart, fun and the most beautiful girl in school. She understands him in ways no one else has. Kyle asks Lindsey if she’ll do him the honor of being his girlfriend. Lindsey sees that he means it and that Kyle really loves her. Any hate Lindsey has toward him vanishes as she almost tells him the truth but instead interrupts herself by holding Kyle’s hand and kissing him with the sunset in the background.
13. Kyle and Lindsey sit at the Raisins Bar near the Goth Kids and Alex. The Goth Kids have decorated their little area to reflect their inner turmoil. Lindsey shows Alex that Kyle and her are still holding hands and are now committed. Michael, leader of the Goth’s, tells Kyle that this progressive step in Park County relationships is a dark transitional twist in the community and he approves of this. Kyle is confused but just takes the complement. Jillian hates what the Goth Kids have done to the small section of the bar. Alex with the help of the Goth Kids tells her to f*ck off and puts her in her place, but Jillian is clearly not over this.
14. Kyle walks into his house and goes to the diner table. His parents are talking about the last PTA meeting. Kyle tells them that he has a girlfriend and how great she is. His parents are thrilled for him. Gerald and Sheila continue talking about the PTA meeting but this time more carefully now that Kyle is home, the two do not like what the Stotch’s have done to their child. Kyle remembers Butters and becomes curious what his parents are talking about.
15. End credits
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Re: Script Idea - Transitional Butters 1st Draft

Postby Tarper » Mon Jan 02, 2017 4:07 am

Climbing the summit– Story Beats

Summery-Kyle and Lindsey are in a committed and happy relationship. Stephen and Linda learn a powerful lesson about tolerance when they realize how much they miss their own child. Randy and Sharon go into Takashi’s athletic store; Randy makes a fool of himself trying to climb the rock wall because he’s out of shape and has a fear of falling. Committed to “win” both Sharon and his pride back, Randy, Jimbo and Stuart all commit to getting into Athletic shape and conquering the wall as a team, to get a 10% off total purchase card. Only problem is Stan and the 4th grade class will be opposing them.


1. It’s the grand opening of Nakamura’s Active Activities. The impressive store is filled with people who look at the fun indoor/outdoor sports setting. There is an Asian-American nutrition bar/café that Mae Nakamura runs; the second story is a full gym with everything from gymnastics to weight lifting. But the highlight of the store is an amazing four story high climbing wall that is sculpted from a cliff and runs the length of the store itself. Randy and Sharon walk inside and get excited as they look at all the high-tech equipment and clothing. Randy talks to Takashi about the great shape he was in, in his youth. Takashi tells Randy that there is never a wrong time to get back into action. Randy argues that he is still in great condition. Takashi humors him with confidence builders. Randy resents Takashi’s comments when Sharon says Randy is not in shape and hasn’t been in the last ten years. Takashi helps another customer; Randy eye’s the climbing wall and poster informing of the upcoming team wall climbing competition. Randy decides to conquer the wall. Sharon doesn’t think this is a good idea. Randy doesn’t listen and gears up to climb.
2. Once on the wall Randy confidently climbs higher and higher until he realizes how tired he is and his hand slips. Randy’s fear of falling hits him full force, he remembers being a small child and his parents telling him he can’t sleep on the top bunk because he could fall and how Randy defiantly climbed to the top bunk only to have to be saved by his brother Jimbo when he nearly rolled over the edge. The floor seemed hundreds of feet down as Jimbo pulled him back onto the bed and had to comfort him. Back in the present, Randy freezes up and begins to panic and scream for Jimbo. Jimbo is in the store and stands next to Sharon confused. Takashi quickly climbs up the wall to save Randy who has actually only been able to climb about eight feet. Randy lunges onto Takashi and begins to panic and cry as he screams for his wife. Takashi tells Randy to calm down and climbs down the wall while holding Randy. Sharon is mortified as everyone in the store stares.
3. On the way back home, Sharon is sick of Randy always letting other peoples accomplishments get the best of him. She also tells Randy how stupid of an idea that was to begin with. Randy is not physically active enough to go on a bike ride let alone climb a four story rock wall. Randy asks to be dropped off.
4. Randy sits at the bar. Feeling pretty down on himself. He orders a pitcher of beer. He can’t figure out how and why he started to become such and out of shape suburbanite. Randy orders a basket of potato skins to go with his beer. Jimbo comes into the bar and sits next to him. Jimbo orders a beer and a burger. Jimbo asks Randy what happened back at the store. Randy tells him that time happened. He reminds Jimbo of when they where in top shape, Randy was a track star and Jimbo was fresh out of boot camp. Stuart McCormick overhears the conversation and joins them. Stuart reminisces when he helped take the South Park boxing team to the state finals. Having enough of living in the past Randy declares that they get back in shape no matter what it takes. Jimbo thinks it’s pointless and they should just except that they aren’t the men that they once where. Randy gives a, “what is dead may never die speech.” Now pumped up, Jimbo and Stuart agree with Randy they just don’t know where to start and what to do. Randy tells them they are going to win the upcoming wall climbing competition. The three eat their food and drink their beers, toasting to getting it all back.
5. Linda and Stephen are at home. The house is quiet. The bare spots from family pictures show clearly on the walls. Butters old room is empty. The Stotch’s have taken all things, boys and girls, out. Linda puts a glass where it shouldn’t go and the two argue. The fight gets intense until they start blaming each other for what happened to their son. It is Stephen who finally realizes the two of them are in the wrong and always have been. They both decided it was better to have a dead son then a daughter they can’t ground. Disgusted with himself, Stephen declares that they should always love their child and be strong for them when they need their parents. Linda at first can’t understand but quickly learns and agrees. She begins to hate herself. The two of them vow to make it better and get their daughter back.
6. Lindsey, Kyle and the gang hangout at Starks Pond. They discus the upcoming wall climbing competition. They agree to who they’ll have in their groups. Cartman is not picked by anyone but Heidi so Alex volunteers to be his next partner. Not entirely comfortable with a transkid being his partner, Cartman accepts anyway.
7. The Nakamura’s throw a party to welcome their new neighbors. The townspeople love their home and impressive greenhouse. Randy eyes all the pictures of Takashi’s athletic achievements with resentment. Sharon loves hearing the stories that Mae tells her about all their adventures.
8. Alex and Lindsey show the other kids the greenhouse. They all end up playing in the pool and having a party of their own. Alex is even considered cool by the boys.
9. Ending the tour in the Basement Randy try’s to lift the weight bar that Takashi uses and can’t even make it budge.
10. Leaving the party Randy and Sharon are drunk. Randy grows tired of how envious Sharon is about Mae and Takashi and all they’ve accomplished.
11. Randy, Jimbo and Stuart form a regiment at the Nakamura Gym. Randy eyes the wall and uses it as motivation to conquer. The more active seniors around them are outperforming Jimbo and Randy. Stuart actually transitions easily into the environment.
12. At the bar Randy and Jimbo are spent, Randy orders them a round of beers. Stuart surprises himself and declines the offer. Randy is still content on their cause. Stuart seems to have an epiphany.
13. The three men continue to workout and push themselves harder. They watch climbing movies and read books while practicing climbing knots. As they do all of this, they continue to meet at the bar after every workout. Stuart slowly separates himself more and more from the two getting himself in better shape. Stuart even helps a few people on their boxing techniques and exercises which Takashi takes notice of.
14. It’s the day of the competition. The fourth graders team up and get ready. Randy and Jimbo arrive, they see Stuart wearing a Active Activates uniform. He is stocking new merchandise. Randy wants to know what’s up. Stuart tells him that Takashi offered him a good job. Randy comes to the conclusion that Takashi has seen them working out and thinks they are way ahead of the competition so he took Stuart away thinking they wouldn’t stand a chance now. Jimbo thinks Randy is over thinking, but Randy won’t hear any of it. Randy and Jimbo dramatically gear up for the climb while the fourth grade casually put on their equipment and get shown climbing basics.
15. Randy psych’s himself up before hooking onto the rope.
16. All the teams are hooked up. Takashi reminds everyone of the rules.
17. The event begins. Randy and Jimbo start out with great teamwork but the fourth graders are still ahead, all but Cartman who is still struggling with the beginning part of the climb. Alex and Heidi help keep him motivated. As time passes many teams give up and rappel down. Only four teams remain, they are Kyle, Lindsey and Stan. Alex, Heidi and Cartman and Kenny, Craig and Tweek. The last team to remain is Randy and Jimbo who are tide with Kyle, Lindsey and Stan as both teams near the summit.
18. Takashi turns on the weather for the wall causing a thunder storm effect.
19. The storm is too much for Kenny’s team who are forced to turn back and rappel down after Tweek falls from the Cliffside. Craig tells the other teams that they need to turn back while they can. Cartman tells Alex and Heidi that he can’t go on, the storm is too much. Heidi can’t go on either. Alex takes control of the situation and decides it’s best to rappel down for the safety of the team. Now it’s just Kyle, Lindsey and Stan versus Randy and Jimbo. Randy and Jimbo are behind but not by much. Jimbo gets caught on a ledge and is slowing down despite Randy’s encouragements. Randy, looking up at the summit decides he must cut Jimbo’s line. Jimbo try’s to tell Randy not too but Randy yell that he’s sorry, but don’t worry because he doesn’t need Jimbo to protect him anymore. Randy dramatically cuts the rope and acts like Jimbo just fell to his death. Randy, tears in his eyes, begins to climb again. Randy is haunted by his childhood memories of falling but he finds inner strength and beats Kyle’s team to the summit and claims his 10% off total purchase card. Randy celebrates as if he climbed Everest.
20. Takashi is yelling to him but Randy can’t make out what he’s saying.
21. Randy tells him to suck it then starts to rappel down. Unfortunately for Randy he had cut the rope when he cut Jimbo loose so instead of rappelling down in victory he falls four stories to the foam floor below.
22. Randy is taken away via ambulance. All the kids have trophies in hand. Lindsey kisses Kyle and tells him how much fun she had. Kyle had a great time but has to leave since the Marsh’s are his ride and they need to get to the hospital for Randy. Before Kyle leaves with Stan and Sharon he invites her to his house for Diner which Lindsey accepts. Stephen and Linda appear and tell Lindsey that they watched her climb and are very proud of her. They know they messed up and don’t expect to make everything just magically right. But they also want Lindsey to know that they miss her and will do whatever they have to so that their daughter will want to come home. Lindsey needs proof but loves them as well. The three hug and Lindsey gives them her trophy to bring home.
23. It’s late at night and Stuart walks through his front door; he holds two bags that looks like six packs of beer are inside them. He looks around at the mess throughout the house. Stuart opens up a photo album and looks at all the terrible photos of his family. He finds one photo of his family where they are very happy. Stuart smiles and puts the picture in an empty frame on the wall before walking into the kitchen. He opens up the bags revealing that they are filled with groceries. He places the food in the fridge. Stuart then begins to clean up the house.
24. End Credits.
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Re: Script Idea - Transitional Butters 1st Draft

Postby Tarper » Mon Jan 02, 2017 5:32 am

Randy Marsh 2016 wrote:This is really good so far
Thanks, I appreciate that.

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