A lost daughter...(my first fan fic)

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A lost daughter...(my first fan fic)

Postby kennygirl78 » Wed May 24, 2006 1:13 am

Chapter 1: A lost Daughter.....


Stan looked out his winow of his house. Such a dirty town he thought. He wanted a better life for he and his family. He saw a drunken homless guy on his stoop.
"Not again...." he said under his breath. "Honey there is another homeless man. I gonna kick him off our stoop and away from our house!"
"Here" said his wife, Lucy, coming out of the kitchen "Give him some of this" She gave Stan a piece of chicken and a bread stick.
Stan took the food, opened the door, and walked outside.
"Hey you!" Stan yelled at the homeless man "take this and go please." Stan gave him the food.
The homeless man took the food and said "just let me finish my rum...."
"Daddy!" said Stan's two year old daughter coming down the stoop.
"Katie go back in.." Stan said.
"That your dauhgter?" asked the homeless man reaching for Katie.
"Don't you lay a hand on her!" Stan yelled at the man.
"Stan!" said Lucy who was at the doorway."Mr...... Please go. My husband is very protective......Kaite come in the house!"
"I want to stay with daddy...." Katie said.
"And I want to finish my rum. Just five minutes...." said the homeless man.
Stan looked at his clock on the wall above his TV.
"Only five minutes." Stan said "That will be at 5:30....and you better be gone."
"Oh I will...." said the homeless man and took a drink of his rum.
Stan closed the door and walked inside.
"Dinner!" said Lucy from the kitchen.
Stan's ten year old son and eight year old daughter sat at the dinner table.
"Yum this lookes good!" said Billy.
"Yeah! Thanks mom!" said Emily.
"Thanks honey.." said Stan.
When everybody sat at the dinner table. Lucy looked under the dinner table.
"What are you doing honey?" asked Stan.
"Where is Katie?" asked Lucy.
"Oh my gosh!" Stan said and ran to the front door and blasted it open.
There sat and envelope and nothing else.
Stan had tears going down at fast rate. Quikly he opened it. It said.......
Dear Stan,
I know you and you know me. We used to be friends until you did a horrible thing to me. Know I live on the streets of the dirty South Park. If you can meet our old friends maybe you can find me and your daughter
.
Your old friend,
.........
Stan dropped the note and screamed in horror. He had lost his daughter.his daughter. Now Lucy is gonna blame it on him because he accidently lost their daughter. His only realy buddies were Eric, Kyle, and Kenny. But they all lived out of South Park. Eric lived up in Denver with his fat girlfriend, Sarah. Kyle lived in Texas with his pregnat wife, Clara. As for Kenny lived up in Las Vegas where he can meet many girls.
But Stan knew that this was for his daughter.
"Honey what is going on?" Lucy asked.
"Honey, we are going to Denver...." Stan said.

This is my first fan fic so please be gentle....
Tell me what you think of it and I will post chapter 2 soon. And maybe you can figure out who the kidnapper is :wink:
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Postby fullmetal4 da new cartman » Wed May 24, 2006 1:25 am

i have a theory it could be butters cartman kyle token craig or someone else
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Postby kennygirl78 » Fri May 26, 2006 1:32 am

chapter 2 coming soon :wink:
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Tue Jun 13, 2006 5:37 am

Oooo, make another one! >< I wanna find out who it is!!
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Postby kennygirl78 » Sat Jun 17, 2006 4:26 am

Chapter 2..Cartman's house

Stan pulls into Cartman's driveway. He runs up to Cartman's door and slams on it.
"Cartman give me back me daughter!" Stan yelled.
Cartman opened the door.
"Stan?"
Stan grabbed Cartman's shirt.
"Give my back me daughter!" he said.
"You daughter?" Cartman asked "Emily?"
"No! Emily is in the car! Katie is the one missing!" Stan said.
Lucy came up from behind Stan.
"Please Cartman! Give her back!" said Lucy.
"I don't have her!" Cartman said.
Stan pushed by Cartman and started to look all around the house.
"Well you see Katie-" Lucy was saying.
"Watch out for that! I don't want you beaking my vase from China!" Cartman yelled "As you were saying.."
"Well Katie...some homeless man kidnapped her. He left us a note..." Lucy started to have tears come down her cheek.
For once Cartman did something nice. He hugged Lucy and said "I will help find Emily..."
"Katie!" said Lucy.
bam!
Stan had threw a chair.
"Stan" Lucy said.
Stan ignored her and went upstairs. Cartman and Lucy heard things drop and him throwing things.
"Don't you break anything Marsh!" Cartman yelled.
There was one more thump..
"Stop it!" said Cartman.
Soon Stan came downstairs.
Stan entered Cartman's bedroom.
There was Cartman's fat girlfriend, Sarah. And she was getting dressed.
"Ay!" she said "get out!"
Stan looked in the closet then under the bed.
"I said get out!" she said and grabbed Stan collar of his shirt and threw him out.
"What are you doing Marsh?" Cartman asked.
Stan made his way to the office. With yelling Cartman at his feet and poor worrying Lucy following right behind.Stan opened the door...then he gasped...this was what he was looking for....

What do you think is in the office? Chapter 3 is next :wink:
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Postby Total_Beefcake » Sun Jun 25, 2006 5:20 pm

YOU EVIL! WHATS IN THE OFFICE?!?!?
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Postby kennygirl78 » Sat Jul 01, 2006 4:13 am

Chapter 3..

"How the hell did that get there?" Eric said.
"What?" said Lucy coming into the room.
Stan ran up to the letter and quickly opened it. This is what it said...

Dear Stan...,
very good. You have did the first part of finding Katie..now here is a clue of the next house you are going to...you knew him in school..he-


Cartman took the note.
"Thats my mail! my mail!" he yelled and looked at it "it is just some dumb, gay, stupid letter..I don't even read letters." and he ripped it and threw it away.
"But a letter to find Katie..and I thought you said you would help us.." Lucy said.
"I know...and I will. But no reading my mail!" Cartman said.
"It is mostly our letter if it says dear Stan-" Lucy was saying.
"My mail My mail!" Cartman said and started to hit Stan who was taking the letter from the trash. Then Cartman took from Stan's hands and ripped it to little pieces.
"Cartman!" Stan said picking up a little piece of paper..
"Marsh!" Cartman said.
"What did you do that for?" Lucy said and started to cry "now we will never find Katie thanks to you..know that hobo guy is gonna do something to her!"
"There is only one thing we can do...we will have to go to Kyle's house..or Kenny's..Leopold's, Token's, Tweek's...but I think we should ge to Kyle's house." Stan said and wipped a tear "Now cheer up Lucy..we will find Lucy.."
"Oh I hope so.." Lucy said.
"Just call the police.." Cartman said.
"We have..but they didn't find he so they say she is dead..which we don't think is true..now Cartman you and Sarah get in your car..we will meet you in the airport to go to Texas."
"I don't wanna go to the Jew's house..." Cartman said.

Chapter 4 is next :wink: Oh and sorry for short chapters..I just wanna leave you on spots where you wonder..
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Postby Kelly MacCornmac » Sat Jul 01, 2006 4:27 am

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A lost daughter...(my first fan fic)

Postby Clyde789 » Sun Jul 02, 2006 5:41 pm

S'good one question : how do you write a fan fic?
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Postby KylezGirl4Ever » Mon Jul 03, 2006 5:04 pm

Butters' name isn't Leopard it's Leopold. Hehe, good FanFic it just bothers me that you make them adults. :twisted:
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Postby kennygirl78 » Mon Jul 03, 2006 6:05 pm

KylezGirl4Ever wrote:Butters' name isn't Leopard it's Leopold. Hehe, good FanFic it just bothers me that you make them adults. :twisted:
lol okay I will fix his name..thanks :wink:
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Postby KylezGirl4Ever » Mon Jul 03, 2006 8:39 pm

Sorry to bother it's also not Teek it's Tweek. I'm not sure if that was a missunderstanding or a typo. :lol:
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Re: A lost daughter...(my first fan fic)

Postby jewlover » Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:54 pm

good fan fic. i didn't really imagine the charecters that way. cartman with a girlfriend?? Kyle in Texas with a pregnant wife?? you nailed kenny though. And stan, i thought he would marry Wendy. and mean to hobbos and protective? I thought he was caring and loving but not fierce, but not so many emotions. i don't really like thinking of them as adults though
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